Art WIP, Advice & Critique Thread - spammy sister of art thread

[MerriedxReldnahc]

I *think* I am finished, I am actually super sick right now so my ability to make good choices is impacted by the fact that I might have sneezed out a chunk of my brain earlier.

I'm vibing with the transparent version, also wanted to try a square of a complimentary color.

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

I *think* I am finished, I am actually super sick right now so my ability to make good choices is impacted by the fact that I might have sneezed out a chunk of my brain earlier.

I'm vibing with the transparent version, also wanted to try a square of a complimentary color.
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looks awesome
the only thing i can suggest is to add the highlight on the left gun just as you did with the right one

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

some radical changes need to be made but i already finished with the far away wall
well almost view from the window need to be changed since i had a brain fart and forgot that my horizon line should be way above of what i did here

edit i got fucked by censor screen and accidantally deleted like 3 hour of progress
i was already done with the table at that point
oh well had to redoo it
on the brigth side the issue with sizes is resolved i think

 

[MerriedxReldnahc]

looks awesome
the only thing i can suggest is to add the highlight on the left gun just as you did with the right one

Thank you frend, added some highlights and it definitely helped!

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

did a second wall a bit
kinda dreading doing the carpet

edit trying to come up with joke posters for fake movies and bands
really happy with potion seller one not sure about wizard cop
and i think i have a space to fit 2 more

came up with weekends at mrtimer's

 

[I AM RETARDED!]

did a second wall a bit
kinda dreading doing the carpet
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edit trying to come up with joke posters for fake movies and bands
really happy with potion seller one not sure about wizard cop
and i think i have a space to fit 2 more
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came up with weekends at mrtimer's
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where knight theme? Like monty python and the holy grail or maybe killer cart wheel, something fun

 

[I AM RETARDED!]

I feel like I should just left the sketch, when I started to refine it I just killed it, maybe I will come back to it, but honestly I was rushing to get it done so I can work on another idea, I wanna do land scape tho, was having more fun painting the fields

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

plan for today - add junk for the kitchen and start to work on the floor and carpet
maybe add another poster on the door

speaking on which i came up with "dirty vimes" and "nine inch swords" but it got cut off to much

edit who came up with carpets like this

 

[I AM RETARDED!]

Sunday, funday, decided to paint a simple scene with Krita brush pack I downloaded, I forgot that was option, but playing around with idea of trying to make something with color pencils on it. I did both day time, and I tried to do night time after listening to riders on storm, car is outta perspective I think and city idea was probably unnecessary has I think there to much grey already.

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

my brain is a mush so if something looks off please tell me
my friend said that crown on the chest looks off but i dont see atm

i wil change the wizard but i was just busy with other stuff

Sunday, funday, decided to paint a simple scene with Krita brush pack I downloaded, I forgot that was option, but playing around with idea of trying to make something with color pencils on it. I did both day time, and I tried to do night time after listening to riders on storm, car is outta perspective I think and city idea was probably unnecessary has I think there to much grey already.
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i really like the night version
looks very cool
i wouldve make lights on the city a bit more sharp though
plus you cheese heist drawing ended up really cool
big fan of the warped perspective

 

[I AM RETARDED!]

i really like the night version
looks very cool
i wouldve make lights on the city a bit more sharp though

I will give it a shot when I get off work in morning.

plus you cheese heist drawing ended up really cool
big fan of the warped perspective

I appreciate it, kinda makes me feel way better after that god awful dog painting, I think dog one could came out way better if I stuck to pencils, I think it really my niche is pencil and more rougher art style. But probably more of excuse for my lack of patience and skills

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

i redid the wizard now he is looking inside the machine
fixed up a kinfe that is stcking out of the pizza box
removed all the jusnk that didnt looked right in this perspective for now
touched up the witch a bit and added some missing shadows

now im fighting with the knight and struggling a bit with his placement
so i present you with the question 1 or 2?

1 seems a bit to far away frome stove but he ended up more relaxed looking than 2
and 2 seems in too much isometric perspective
also now looking at it a hat that is in the bascket seems to be small so i need to fix it
edit did the thing

now for small item changes and then coloring
oh and i need to add a cat

 

[man_made_of_meat]

i redid the wizard now he is looking inside the machine
fixed up a kinfe that is stcking out of the pizza box
removed all the jusnk that didnt looked right in this perspective for now
touched up the witch a bit and added some missing shadows
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now im fighting with the knight and struggling a bit with his placement
so i present you with the question 1 or 2?
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1 seems a bit to far away frome stove but he ended up more relaxed looking than 2
and 2 seems in too much isometric perspective
also now looking at it a hat that is in the bascket seems to be small so i need to fix it

1, always choose movement over correctness imho

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

i think im getting better at this whole color thing

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

did the carpet but the window doesnt look quite right
need to figure out how to do it better


right now im have 5 active layers on it and i think tint is a problem

but without it its still kinda off

maybe like this?

 

[Marzipan Apple]

did the carpet but the window doesnt look quite right
need to figure out how to do it better

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right now im have 5 active layers on it and i think tint is a problem
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but without it its still kinda off
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maybe like this?
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Firstly, try changing the tint to more of a cool blue. The current greenish tint doesn't look like natural light to me. You could also try adding a diagonal sheen/glare to the window to make it look more like glass.

Secondly, the lines in the window are a bit too dark and sharp. In real life, things in the distance look bluer and hazier due to the atmosphere. Try adding some blur and lightening the lines a bit to make the outside objects look farther away.

Thirdly, natural light is much stronger than artificial light. Windows generally tend to be the brightest thing in a room. The window in your drawing though is actually pretty dark. The area around the window is also pretty dark even though the light coming in should heavily illuminate it. Try cranking up the brightness on the window and everything the natural light is hitting.

 

[I AM RETARDED!]

right now im have 5 active layers on it and i think tint is a problem
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What program are you using to do that? I don't use many layers because I cant figure out how to sort them like that, if I could do that I wouldn't mind using tons of layers because it wouldn't crowd my hotbar and drive me nuts

 

[DefinitelyNotMe]

Firstly, try changing the tint to more of a cool blue. The current greenish tint doesn't look like natural light to me. You could also try adding a diagonal sheen/glare to the window to make it look more like glass.

Secondly, the lines in the window are a bit too dark and sharp. In real life, things in the distance look bluer and hazier due to the atmosphere. Try adding some blur and lightening the lines a bit to make the outside objects look farther away.

Thirdly, natural light is much stronger than artificial light. Windows generally tend to be the brightest thing in a room. The window in your drawing though is actually pretty dark. The area around the window is also pretty dark even though the light coming in should heavily illuminate it. Try cranking up the brightness on the window and everything the natural light is hitting.

the idea was that the window would illuminate this area

and i intended origiannly to make the tint yellow but it kinda eneded up greenish also i wanted to darken a rea around the window to make window look brighter
i did hovewer changed that the tinint is is in front of the view and reduced oppacity of the line work to 60 and colors to 90 i hopes that it will bring haziness to the picture
also i guess air should be illuminated as well a bit kinda like this

not a final thing but the idea should come around

What program are you using to do that? I don't use many layers because I cant figure out how to sort them like that, if I could do that I wouldn't mind using tons of layers because it wouldn't crowd my hotbar and drive me nuts

Krita
layers do need a lot of organization but generally whats on top of the list is on top of the image
you can also group layers to simplify the process with ctrl+G
if you want i can send the krita file for you to look around and figure out how they work

 

[Marzipan Apple]

the idea was that the window would illuminate this area

If you want direct sunlight illuminating the room, then you'll probably have to adjust some of the colors and values. I suggest adding a new layer and setting it to screen mode. Then paint all illuminated areas with bright yellow, while dodging/burning anything you want brightened/darkened.
I did a very quick example here:


Yellow sunlight gives the room a kind of warm, cozy feeling. If you want something with a cooler feel, you could use light blue instead and soften the illumination to give the impression of indirect diffused daylight.

To be clear, these are just suggestions. I don't want to hijack your picture. So feel free to flush my ideas down the dumper and do whatever you want.

i did hovewer changed that the tinint is is in front of the view and reduced oppacity of the line work to 60 and colors to 90 i hopes that it will bring haziness to the picture

Yeah, that definitely looks much better. I still think the window could stand to be a bit brighter though.

also i guess air should be illuminated as well a bit kinda like this

Damn, that looks pretty cool lol.

 

[I AM RETARDED!]

Krita
layers do need a lot of organization but generally whats on top of the list is on top of the image
you can also group layers to simplify the process with ctrl+G
if you want i can send the krita file for you to look around and figure out how they work

Im learning new things all time with it, I just found last week you can animate with it, but ya I didn't know you can do that, make it alot easier has im constantly click layer toggle view one at a time to find what layer im lookin for and project im doing has 40 layers and shit a nightmare.