Liz Fong-Jones / 方禮真 / Elliot William Fong / @lizthegrey / Honeycomb.io Field CTO - 'Consent accident' enjoyer, ex-Google employee, nepotistic sex pest, Robert Z'Dar look-alike who wants authority over the Internet

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I want to see everything this brick faced rapist has built to crumble. I do not care how long it will take.
 
Elliot makes so much sense when you consider he's involved with Tallpoppy and closely related to that wikipedia lady.
"Pay me to make bad words about you go away"
Even explains his crusade against this site.
 
Do you think he's used threads here to contact people to bilk them out of money?
Wouldn't put it past him to grift the lolcows.
Who they gonna tell? Us?
 
For posterity: Null just published a Substack article about everything that's been going on. Go read it!

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Online Censorship's Institutional Power​

The converging interests of technocrats, media, and academia, as seen through the lens of the world's most deplatformed US-legal website.​

https://madattheinternet.substack.com/p/online-censorships-institutional
https://archive.is/34V8w

Liz Fong-Jones is also aware of the article. :) Notice how he unlinked/muted himself from Null's tweet:
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This article is a pretty clear shot across the bow at Elliot.

It's going to be either ignored, or more likely cause a renewed attack. Which of course is part of it's purpose.

@Null

For god's sake Jersh, please take a writing course if you want to put out stuff like this. Your idea's are good but your very ineffective at getting them across. Just like your MATI streams, writing well takes skill and practice. MATI has come a long way since you first hemmed and hawed your way into our hearts so take the time and invest in your writing skills if you have more plans like this in the future.

Plz no ban, me give you much sex leg.
 
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I thought it was pretty good. I'm not an editor though.
Maybe you should get someone at the SFWA to check it out.
 
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I thought it was good. This one part though is a bit wonky:
such as T1 Internet backbone company Cogent, based out of D.C., who to this day will block any of their own customers who allow the Kiwi Farms to use them.
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"any of their own customers who provide services to the Kiwi Farms" probably works better. Or provides transit.
Either way, kept me occupied on the shitter :cunningpepe:
 
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I’ve seen fanfics written much worse get rave reviews and millions of views. I thought it was good, and most people on the Internet are barely literate in my experience, so I wouldn’t take all the criticisms to heart.
 
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Look Jersh, I love you like the retarded step-child I never had but your writing is unfocused and you don't really flow from point to point in your thesis very well. Think of it like writing for a 6 year old. Your core theme has to be easy to see and consistent across the article. To me you spend most of the time talking about how Elliot has fucked with you and not why it's so critical to the survival of the Internet that he be stopped.

Why is what Brick-Face doing wrong? How does it/will it effect the average tard on the the Internet? What could fix it? Who should act? How should we act?

You lay out a lot of blame and nasty words and I think that undercuts the seriousness of the issue. Your critics will come out and say it's just a anti-tranny hit piece and not address your real points. It (to me at least) comes across a lot like a rage post and not a call to arms.
Be professional, leave your shit at the door (or better write a dedicated article about it). Write something the juronoslimes can't take out of context and give ammo to those who will quote you.

Again, just like streaming shit like this practice and skill and a little bit of help.

Really, I know your a busy dude but a course in journalistic writing would do you a world of good in both your rants and your MATI streams. Do it online if you can scrape out the free time. Or not, I mean it's your life but if you want to get real attention to your articles your going to have to give your friends out there something to work with. You do have people out there who want to help you but their hands are tied to a certain extent by your past and present issues.

Really I would break this into at least 3 or 4 articles. One about the big problem and what can be done to fight it. The next about Fong and his antics and his back room deals. The next about PATH and Cogent and how they're attacking the backbone of the Internet. The last about how the few people fighting the good fight need to learn to come together and work for the big goal, how EFF are abodoning their duty to protect free speech in order to chase clout and popularity in online circles. Calling out the bad actors is great but make sure it's cool and straight from the source.

Make each article's central thesis punch hard, use the facts and keep it cool and spefic to that thesis. Avoid a lot of personal shit and just remember that people are most interest in how and why this will affect them and not something as nebulous as protect the internets from bad corp and troon elites.

Anyway..plz no ban
 
It's extremely important to figure out a way to condense this issue into an easily digestible bite to spoonfeed to normies who have influence, and this article accomplishes that to some extent. I genuinely think that a lot of people just don't realize the import and ultimate selfishness of what Dong is doing, and how he's using the ultimate get-out-of-jail-free card of "transphobia" to obfuscate it. It's very promising that mainstream people are starting to turn on Keffals and I think that it's only a matter of time before someone picks this story up and runs with it. The more clear material there is to work with, the better.
 
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You’re very, very good at writing. It’s formatted well and you paint a very good and engaging picture about what you’re trying to put across.

However, if we take a look at this chart detailing how well somebody spells, it clearly indicates that you’re fucked up. Once in a blue moon, you have the tenancy to spell like a fag. It would seem that momentarily your shit’s all retarded.

This is okay, as my ex-wife is a school teacher. She spells like a fag, teaches other children to presumably spell like fags and she is occasionally mentally retarded. She does very well for herself despite these shared deficits and living in Portland.
 
As a summary of of facts for interested parties the article fine. If you want to reach a more general audience a professional writer could make it more engaging.
 
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