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celestialthread's Omegaverse CEO has finally been completed. It is safe to say that everything I predicted would happen in the fic, did indeed happen, chief among them the 'sexist CEO learns he has child, sees the error of his ways and becomes a devoted father'. It has crossed over 1k comments, most of them interactions between the fanbase and the author. The most notable thing about this fic, remember, was a grown-ass man getting jealous of his five-year-old for being breastfed, and said kid accused of being the child of a druggie. Just Omegaverse things. Lines for this chapter include:
- the truth is my cock has been standing at attention around you twenty-four hours a day
- Those gorgeous, full tits. The way your ass has gotten rounder and somehow fits my hands even better than before. The way your whole body has softened. You're breathtaking.
- The baby is fine. But I won't be if I don't get a cock and an orgasm in the next five minutes.
- It had been far too long since he'd had that beautiful cock in his mouth.
- I have absolutely no intention of leaving this bed until I'm exhausted, sweaty, thoroughly fucked, full of your cum, and satisfied enough to survive at least the next several days.
- "I'm going to rest for five more minutes. Then I'm going to suck your huge cock until I can't breathe. You've deprived me of it for far too long, and I don't think I can last another day without choking on your dick.
Remember when Benji was a difficult pregnancy due to his disabilities? I guess we're forgetting about them because Mommy Dearest is going to pop out three more because his penis-owning pet owner was talking about filling him with 'pups' while cock-drunk. Also notice how none of the children are born disabled, too.
I'll say. You are just beginning to settle into your lives after Stinky Dmitri failed in trying to frame Jayce as a jailbait chaser. Now you can be Mommy and Daddy dearest in this hetslop.
> Jayce was an incredible father
Called it: the sexist did a 180, found out his true nature, and attends his children's needs despite getting jealous of his own son for breastfeeding. I love how that incident was completely glossed over.
Let me guess: they know which sex the fetus is and whether they'll be alpha or omega.
As this is the holidays, this means kissing under the mistletoe - which Benji, horrified, says, 'Mommy! Stop kissing Daddy!' - and meeting Viktor's father, Corin Reveck. Jayce dreads meeting him; after all those instances of him fucking omegas and dropping them like trash, and being accused of chasing jailbait, one wonders what Viktor's father thinks of the entire thing. Viktor, by contrast, thinks of their more amorous activities, happily thinking about spending the days in bed jumping on his alpha male's cock.
Benji, reacting as five-year-olds do, wants to open presents this Christmas rather than watch his parents kiss. Jokes are exchanged on whether Benji would prefer different parents, which also horrifies Benji as he instinctively calls for his mother. He has to be consoled over this stupid joke, because we can't separate a poor alpha child from their parents, yeah? We don't allow divorce in this universe.
In the Talis household, they seemingly cannot say no to Viktor's son, leaving him exasperated and defeated as all those years of single motherhood are destroyed in a single day. The kid is spoiled: remote-controlled cars, new game consoles (do you know how much those things cost?!), a massive race track for said cars, three board games, books, clothes, and enough toys to overcrowd Mariah Carey's closet. Jayce tells Viktor that when they move in together, they'll give the kid a bigger room, with all the furniture and space he needs, because look at the joy on that kid's face. His parents are loaded! Every shopping trip they go on means more things for that kid, while Viktor has to drag all his things to Ximena's house (and I am sure she is happy knowing she's getting more BLEACHED grandchildren).
The house itself is filled with cousins and cousins of cousins, with the individuals saying Benji was a drug addict's son being noticeably absent (it's been slightly retconned to say they were accusing Viktor of 'baby-trapping' Jayce when they were saying the kid didn't even look like Jayce at all). After Benji opens all of his presents, he proudly declares he's taking his race track to show the other boys at school - but not a girl named Emily. In this universe where your gender role is assigned to you at birth, it's simply 'weird' for girls to play with boys. She breaks her toys and a kid named Travis' helicopter, so Benji has to make sure this destructive bitch doesn't ruin his property. Something something a metaphor for the fall of Western Civilization.
Later, Viktor asks Benji to come upstairs to Jayce's old room, as there is 'one more surprise' he has to share with him - away from the other family members. You don't want a bunch of Latinas rushing a weak white woman after she declares her pregnancy, you know. Anyways, Benji deduces that Jayce is going to move in with 'Mommy' permanently, meaning all his stuff will be taken to their apartment, although he isn't sure if their apartment has enough room. Benji protests this, saying he likes where they live and his room, but is convinced with the promise of a bigger room - with the promise that a giant giraffe will be painted on the walls. He is sold when Viktor laughs and says Jayce will paint an entire zoo for him.
Then we get into him announcing his pregnancy to him. It's the usual, five-year-old talk, 'Remember when you were really tiny in mommy's belly' etc. Benji goes wide-eyed, and Viktor explains the basic of heterosexual reproduction to him: mommy and daddy love each other very much, and Benji's new sibling was created the same way he was. Benji asks how long it will take for the baby to arrive, and Viktor says six months (meaning he is three months along). He then inquires whether he'll have a brother or a sister, and openly says he hopes he'll get a brother, because 'they are more fun to play with'. Good to know that Ximena's tireless struggles to teach feminism in her son did not pass on to her grandson. He is already decided girls and women are inferior. Those alpha male genes are good for something, huh?
We cut to February, where Jayce is taking the family somewhere for a surprise - blindfolded. Viktor is five months pregnant and is doing good so far, but laments how Jayce makes 'big' babies and how said babies blow out his back (something he's clearly used to by now, hehe). His disabilities are not mentioned; they seemingly disappear thanks to that magical alpha male sperm. What is the surprise? A beautiful brick house that looks like it belongs in the English countryside, with vines wrapping around the windows and a forest dusted with snow in the back. It looks like something out of a fairy tale, and Jayce sheepishly announces that he saw it online and reserved it. Viktor is initially surprised, but Jayce says he could see their traditional, conservative family with a white-picket fence and their four kids and pets here. Benji is excited to learn he could have the entire upstairs as his bedroom, while Viktor is quiet. Jayce insists that the final decision lies with 'mommy'. Viktor snaps back, dryly, that he would make a decision if Jayce stopped talking for five minutes.
In the end, and without fanfare, Viktor agrees to this fairytale house. He does point out that the house would cost a fortune, but Jayce insists that he got it for a good deal. There's a good school nearby (meaning it's mostly white), and he simply could not let the opportunity slip by. Viktor sarcastically asks if he's going to sell his penthouse to move out to the countryside, and Jayce responds, 'I'm a fucking CEO, I can afford it!' before Benji scolds him for saying a bad word. He apologizes, and says he'll rent out the penthouse. He doesn't want Viktor to worry with his 'little bean' - that he says is the size of a grapefruit now - and asks him if he wants to live there the time the baby is born. He enthusiastically agrees, telling Jayce he loves him and kisses him - before Benji interrupts, wanting to see his new room.
In March, Viktor wakes Jayce up in the middle of the night so he can have some strawberries with mustard. The baby clearly has some peculiar tastes! Unfortunately, it isn't the season for strawberries, but the 24-hour store might have them, so Jayce agrees to wake up and buy the potential strawberries from this rare-as-fuck supermarket that is open 24 hours a day. Not even Walmart has those hours anymore.
Yes, you're getting another shitty smut scene. As a treat. Just so you know this is 100% gay sex and not a vagina slapped on a man for the sake of having 'easier' sex.
> I can't think about anything else. I just want to come
> I'm a fucking whale!
Yes, the disabled Auschwitz queen here has gained *checks notes* 11 kilos, or 24 pounds. What a fucking fatass. A real chonker at...what? 120 lbs? 140? You're just the average American woman, fam!
> Then why don't you want to fuck me?
Because he might just skewer the fetus with how big his cock is. Pull out the whole damn thing like it's a KFC meal pulled from the deep fryer.
> I want to fuck you constantly. Morning, noon, night, I could spend the rest of my life fucking you
So do alpha males get erectile dysfunction? Do their dicks shrink with age? Or do they just keep breeding until they keel over and die?
> I didn't want you to feel obligated to have sex because you thought I needed it
Aww, what a feminist sweetheart. You wouldn't never known he fucked those wet holes and abandoned them because that's what alpha males do. He respects boundaries - just not when it comes to breastfeeding, that is.
He can't. You're too fat, remember? It'd be like climbing a cement truck.
> The truth is my cock has been standing at attention around you twenty four hours a day
You should go to the ER. You'd already be dead from blood loss.
> This nonsense about you gaining weight? Those gorgeous, full tits
He went from being completely flat to DD mom tits. It's almost as if he fucked the woman back into him; it's almost as if this character was a woman all along, but we won't call it that because it's transphobic. Look at the beauty of pregnancy here - isn't that just so homosexual?
> I can't fake that state, V. This is my life. No peace. No relief
I guess alpha males don't suffer from blood loss for those massive schlongs, they just handle it like deep sea fish.
> Which meant all questionable life decisions could legally be blamed on hormones
You mean WHOREMOANS, because you're moaning like a whore, get it?
> Take me to my bed and fuck me stupid
Implying you've been nothing but a cock-drunk whore this entire time.
> We're not going to hurt the baby?
No, you're gonna skewer it like those fishermen do out in the Pacific.
> The baby is fine. I won't be if I don't get a cock and an orgasm in the next five minutes
This is a real line.
> Almost eleven kilos during the pregnancy already
And what did he weigh before? 100 lbs? 120? He was never heavy to begin with. A small breeze could make him float away like he's a dandelion seed.
> You're so fucking sexy
I guess it really is time for a THARR SHE BLOWS joke, considering he's fucking a whale. Allegedly.
> His swollen breasts spilled free
And what cup are those, by any chance?
> The thick, eager cock Viktor had spent far too long without
Watch it pound his cervix and get close to actually skewing that baby like a Japanese whale hunter. The druggie baby is about to become sushi.
> It had been far too long since he'd had that beautiful cock in his mouth
This is a real line.
> Maternity pants
We aren't even trying, and never tried to begin with. This character is just a woman. We just won't do the gender swap because we won't get the same clicks as we do with M/M.
> After such a long break, Viktor was tight. Very tight
Guess he won't need the husband stitch, eh?
> Make yourself feel good. Fuck yourself on my cock
That's right. Stick your alpha male cock inside that omega pussy. Reproduce and continue the human race. Create BLEACHED babies. We are exploring homosexual gender here.
> He felt desired, wanted and beautiful
Yeah I'm sure a sperm whale feels desired and wanted too when the Japanese haul it up on their ship.
> He couldn't understand why he'd tortured himself with so many doubts
Because Jayce was a man slut who viewed omegas as retarded holes who couldn't hold a conversation with him - unlike strong, powerful, high IQ alphas - and his mood suddenly changed when he found the virgin he liked. It's almost as if a man slut had a virgin fetish and then had to rise up to the plate because child support laws don't exist in Omegaverse.
> He wasn't held back by pain, disability, or a growing belly
I wasn't aware Viktor even HAD a disability, because it hasn't impacted his health whatsoever. You'd think someone with a spinal deformity would have a difficult pregnancy, but nooooooo...we just have a pregnancy fetish and we are going to use our self-insert so we can get that Kiss My Fish conservative family. Charlie Kirk would be proud.
> He fucked like an animal
Name a time when he HASN'T been an animal.
> Fuck me harder. Please alpha - fuck me harder
He already is, you retarded cum slut.
> Heavy, aching, constantly demanding attention
Is he going to get jealous of his newborn for sucking those mom tits or are we just going to forget that that was ever penned?
> There would be plenty of opportunities in the future
> He had every intention of ending up pregnant with his pup again and again
Wow it's almost as if your entire purpose in life is to lie there and get pregnant. I guess we're just done with his disabilites affecting his health because he's doing pretty damn well, if you ask me.
> True alpha
Do true alphas get jealous over their 'pups' for breastfeeding or is it just him?
> The baby knows mommy is happy
The baby knows 'mommy' is female and is 'assigned' that gender role because omegaverse believes in hereditary and a caste system - but wokely.
> You haven't fucked me in a month. If you think one round is enough to satisfy me, then you're either incredibly naïve or incredibly stupid
On the next episode of 'Wicked Tuna':
> Then I'm going to suck your huge cock until I can't breathe. You've deprived me off it for far too long, and I don't think I can last another day without choking on your dick
This is a real line.
We then cut to June, where the couple is to meet Corin, Viktor's father. Benji notices that 'mommy's' bump is gone, meaning we didn't get to read a graphic pregnancy scene. As it turns out, he gave birth to a daughter - an omega no less - who is 'calmed' by alpha pheromones because we have already decided what gender roles a fucking infant is going to have. Very progressive. We are totally exploring gender. Benji, however, is disgusted, saying she looks 'weak' and 'small'; he thought she would be bigger, given the size of Viktor's stomach (that has no stretch marks, btw) but is only the size of a loaf of bread. They have to tell him that she has to grow before she can be equal to him in size, but what's that gonna do to a kid who already has an instinctual notion of superiority? They end up naming the kid Gabriela - sounds like a drug addict's name, tbh - and Benji has his little five-year-old talk about how he can't wait for her to grow up and how he'll be the best big brother ever. He then asks if he can kiss Gabi on the end, and both his parents get tears in their eyes. Look at their sweet little family. Aren't they just the cutest thing?
When it comes to Benji's birthday party (Gabi is one month old at this point) they throw a huge party, and everyone, including his preschool class, is invited. Ximena, happy that she is no longer a racist abuela and has another pale-skinned, mixed race granddaughter, guards her like a cougar, so no one gets a chance to see what she looks like. Benji makes his wish, blows out the candles on his huge cake, and says he hopes his wish will come true. What is this wish? Another sibling, naturally.
We then cut to Jayce eating out Viktor right after they put Gabi to sleep, and he's been at it for 30 minutes, enough to make Viktor hump into the mattress, until Benji opens the door and the two parents have to jerk away from each other. Getting jealous over breastfeeding is one thing, but having your pup witness that? A bridge too far. Benji wants them to get ready to make breakfast and take him to school, as he is just starting first grade, and he doesn't want to be late. Viktor tells him to go get dressed, and in the meantime, Jayce can finish eating him out. He needs more than just pancakes and cream, you know.
Later, they end up going to the beach - their private beach, like they're Jared and Ivanka - and it's there that he finally proposes to Viktor, giving him all the golden-tongued talk about how they're mates, they belong together, etc etc. What's interesting is that he wants to call him HUSBAND in the marriage, despite all the talk calling him 'wife' and 'mother' everywhere else. It's almost as if the author decided at the last minute this is supposed to be a same-sex marriage, not opposite-sex marriage, even when this entire thing is just repackaged hetslop.
And would you look at that, Benji finds them, asking if 'daddy asked mommy to marry you', because wouldn't you know it, that was his wish, and it came true! Our happy family got their happily ever after. Then, we get the end notes:
It earned 'warmth and enthusiasm' because these people LOVE omegaverse stories. It doesn't matter how predictable or shitty they are, provided it has that tag they will be all over it like roaches on Asmongold's hair. I knew from the first chapter where this was going, and I was not surprised. The sexist had a change of heart and became a family man, and it ends with our single mother getting married and living in the fairytale house of their dreams.
Speaking of single mother: this is just a woman with male pronouns. The author makes no attempt to even write him as male; he just has a vagina slapped on him and that's it. Socially, culturally, and biologically, this is a woman; he is called a 'wife' and 'mother' many times throughout the fic, and is only called 'husband' at the end. Many Jayviks are known to just slap a vagina on Viktor and evade accusations of 'transphobia', when in reality, it's a way for them to avoid the 'hetslop' accusation. In truth, this fic IS your basic hetslop with every trope imaginable, just make the sexism worse - but wokely. We got four smut scenes where our single mother just lies on their back and takes it, becoming a cum-hungry slut (as they so lovingly put it) who just goes, 'alpha alpha uwu~' when they whip out their huge, masculine, manly man meat. We have an alpha male get away with getting jealous of his own son for breastfeeding, but that's OK because it's a kink. I have already brought that up countless times, so there is nothing more I can add on that criticism.
In short, it's hetslop but woke. You, too, can slap a vagina on a male character and treat them like woman-lite provided it's omegaverse. You will never be criticized because It's Just Biology bro. You are exploring gender wokely and progressively. You can also be a full-on eugenicist and erase disabilities if you have your 'disabled man' get pregnant over and over again. Who needs gene therapy when alpha male semen does the job cheaply and effectively? We don't need Aktion T4. We need alpha male cock.
This next entry was written in 2024, abandoned as the author knew little about the source material, and revisited it again today. Let's give it a peek. Edit: it's not as bad as I thought. It is not a 'gay' fic, regardless of the tags and the author's insistence.
Here I always thought it was 'wrack', but 'rack' is the right word. Both are used interchangeably. A useless remark, but interesting nonetheless.
If we're going off the stills, Jayce actually has a hookah in his room, so he should know how to smoke
Drunk actions are sober thoughts. At least he isn't a rapist for once.
> You're smart yourself
He should be. You are both geniuses.
> He turned around and found himself captivated by Jayce's gaze: one of adoration, care, and longing
Damn, that blunt sure did hit fast, eh?
"You got a smoke?"
"Got gum."
The dialogue is fine so far. I actually like its wittiness. We'll see if it sticks during the smut.
Ah, the 'blow smoke in someone else's mouth to get high' trope. It's not bad for once. There is always room for things to get worse.
> Drunk Jayce never has any fun
At least this iteration knows restraint. Far too many fics have him acting like an animal. And Viktor does have a point: it would take a lot more blunts to get him inebriated than alcohol will, sex differences aside. Viktor takes it for his pain. Jayce drunk for pleasure. Implying the THC content isn't high, of course.
You accepted the job. You didn't have to, but you did so your research wouldn't get stolen. That's the ultimate price you have to pay.
Well at least there was SOME attempt to make some chemistry. I guess the magnets are really working this time.
But is his waist small enough that his thumbs can meet in the middle? That is the question.
> He seemed to completely encompass him
Sexual dimorphism will do that.
> Made quick work of Jayce's tie and vest
Not bad for being lip locked.
> Moved to kiss his neck again
> He was the one who broke the furious kiss
He was on your neck.
> no. Just touch me
Here I thought there was going to be a mini-plot about how he was afraid of 'outing' himself, but nope. He is just a man with a vagina, and Jayce doesn't have to go through all that work for prep. It is what it is.
See point above. This makes it seem as if Viktor is hesitant to out himself, but no biggie - Jayce is a very tolerant gay man. He'll take what he's given.
There's that belly bulge we know and love!
> His partner's hands on Viktor's hips
But is his waist so small his thumbs met in the middle?
> Swollen cock
We know it's a clit. Only one of those cocks makes the other belly bulge, and it ain't yours.
> The pair of them were one, intertwined upon the desk where they did their faithful work
> It was almost spiritual
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia. And orgasming minutes apart? Wow, you really are complementary!
Afterwards, they clean up, they shower, and it ends with Viktor ruminating over whether what happened between them was real. It is not the horror show I thought it was, but it isn't gay. It is just repackaged straight sex.
Here is the second chapter of multi_yohanna's The 22-year-old Virgin. You will not see Justice for Mark in this one.
> A big part of him fears that Jayce changed his mind and is now scared to tell him
I noticed this in her ground-breaking fic, but yohanna writes Viktor like he's Taylor Swift - song version, not who she actually is.
> Fresh off starting T, and finally feeling like his body was his own, he was deliriously horny
> Every hot guy catches his eye
> Thinks about sex and dating and experiencing stuff like hookup culture
> It's just a fantasy because he's mortally afraid of being rejected by actual gay men who don't like pussy
Figures.
> His abusive childhood did not matter
An FTM got abused as a kid? You don't say.
> Jayce was everything he had ever dreamed of in a man. Tall, painfully handsome
So your typical Ideal Male Body type found in every hetslop book. Notice how no short men are featured in these fics at all, just 6'0 ones? Justice for our Short Kings.
> He woke up wet and aching after dreaming of Jayce bending him over their lab desk and having his way with him
Oh? You fantasize about a hot male bending you over and treating your wet hole like a hole? You don't say.
> The broken pieces were stomped into the ground and buried into a fine powder when Viktor found out Jayce had a girlfriend
He's upset that Jayce prefers cis pussies and not 'man' pussies, even though both belong to the same sex class. This was before he found out Jayce was bisexual, and before he inevitably outed himself. If anything, the sheer jealousy over cis women - notice how that is a trend, too? - would give it away.
> They could chat at least once a week
I find this hilarious because they can do that in THIS fic, but Viktor lost his mind when he didn't get a private message over Instagram in a week. Logic.
> Viktor is the one who dims all the lights and makes sure not to make a sound when Jayce's migraines hit
> Makes him soup when he's sick
You identify as a man, yet revert to 'mother, maid, nurse' when it comes time to caretaking. Funny how that works.
> They are each other's person, their pieces fitting together seamlessly to form a perfect puzzle
Almost as if you have complementary genitalia.
> Gentle but firm, as if Viktor actually matters 'Cause she wears short skirts, I wear T-shirts She's Cheer Captain and I'm on the bleachers
Dreaming 'bout the day when you wake up and find
That what you're looking for has been here the whole time'
> What if Jayce realized that he has to consider Viktor somewhat attractive for their plan to work
Do you not consider yourself attractive despite taking testosterone and claiming to be a man? What, did you transition into an ugly gremlin? Sure sounds like it!
They say em-dashes are a sign of AI. In this case, it's someone transitioning into still-country Taylor Swift.
> If Viktor extended his pinky, they would touch
Oh I wonder who else's pinkies are going to touch...on a waist so small they met in the middle...
> Sort of recreate your attempt with Mark
Mark did nothing wrong, and I don't think it's a good idea to get mad at a Viltrumite.
> You won't have to worry about being seen with me in that way
What, you don't want him being seen with a trans man? I thought the whole reason you injected that T was to be your 'true self'. What the fuck is this, then?
> He still doesn't do anything without asking, and his eyes well up every time it happens
Would you like a tissue?
> To ground himself to the present, and remind himself that he is safe
> He always felt completely safe
Always about safety with these pooners.
> There isn't any hair on it, which Viktor stores away for further analysis later on. Does that mean that Jayce waxes himself? Or has his hair growth spurt not come in yet?
He's half Mexican, and a grown-ass man at that. If anything, he's going to start getting hair everywhere else BUT his head thanks to his white heritage. He'll be looking like a Cuban granddad when he's 35.
> Not that we're comparable in any way, but
Tee hee, he's just so shy and anxious. They really do fit together but he'll never say it out loud, uwu.
> The touch is grounding, and Viktor feels himself leaning into it for once
Leave it to an actual male to make the FTM feel safe, rather than create that safety for themselves.
> It also makes his butt look good, if Viktor is quite honest
It might be an Arkansas 7/10 but that's a 2.5/10 for Latinas.
> Viktor takes out his meager makeup supplies and puts on some eyeliner
> Didn't do it before because makeup made him feel more alienated
> It's somehow more masc to do it as a 'man'
You don't have the confidence to pull it off. You are, quite literally and figuratively, a poser.
> His hands are sweaty and shaky
"There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti"
> It's what he's always done, retreat into his shell and lean on what's familiar as soon as things get heavy
Men either become 4chan autists or North Hollywood Shootout lads when they get like this. FTMs? They just sit there and cry. You'd think he would've changed by now, but no.
Character like Taylor Swift, speaks like Justin Trudeau. What a combo.
> The Viktor of three years ago would have died on the spot
You're dying on the spot right now, lmao
> Jayce has a knack for business and he doesn't
Sound like you aren't male-brained enough for the business.
> Clearly aimed at a clientele that isn't broke college students
I agree, the music isn't punk enough. Sounds nice, though.
> Like a fox stalking its prey
Doesn't have the same power as a 'wolf stalking its prey' because foxes are considered sly, clever, and 'diseased' with stinking piss. His Tom Ford look is nice, though.
> Hello, beautiful, is this seat taken
Oh, God. He's trying to sound like a suave James Bond but ends up sounding like Raoul Silva from 'Skyfall'.
This chapter was short. The author says the next one, published next week, will be huge. I wager it'll be around 10-11k words, so get ready for the Sparknotes edition.
Man they are putting something in the water in the Philippines.
"Fuck buddy ko? Talk about cockblocker" is how I will introduce myself to citizens of that island.
Man I heard he was fucking over gas prices, but this is new:
Honestly given AO3 standards that is pretty low. You would think that the sort of total degenerates in there would be all in on lewding the teenage holocaust victim as jewish jailbait but who knows how the mind of a AO3 coomer works.
Because Anne Frank is Jewish, and two of the three owners of AO3 are Jewish. They will tolerate written child porn/pedophilia but if you went after their co-ethnics like that, you're done. Jews are not well-represented in fandom (aside from owning one of the largest fanfiction websites), and Jewish characters don't really get popular. The only example I can give is Byler, but their actors - Noah Schnapp and Finn Wolfhard - are coded as white when they both have Jewish heritage.
The Bridgerton AU has now been updated - again - to include 22 chapters. Chapter 20 has TWO smut scenes in it, with this chapter starting right off with our Auschwitz baddie taking off their sexy black nightgown. Lines for this chapter include:
- I know your pussy is open for me, dripping all over my fingers. I want to rip that robe off you and take you all in
> He knew that writers embellished sensations with beautiful words so that even the most insensitive people could feel that heat
Nice lampshading. Unfortunately, you lost me the moment you use 'soggy pussy', so now every time I see that mallet get shoved up that cooter, I just think of a wet sponge. Well done.
> You use your mouth to take me to the stars; I want to do the same to you
In which Viktor, who has already taken Jayce's dick twice, seemingly forgets how big it is and gets to admire it in 4K.
> One of his hands slid down to Viktor's head and grabbed his hair in a primal instinct
He went from being the heir apparent of a kingdom, to having his hair pulled to suck some dick. Amazing.
> You're beautiful. So fucking beautiful
And he has the physique of a tuberculosis patient. But I'm to believe he's the Diamond of the Season while looking like raw chicken? Please.
> An imposing length that curved slightly upward
Again, we KNOW how big he is; it was described when they first went at it. Now, for the third time, we see this Coke can dick described in detail, and of course it's just sooooo big and sooo imposing. We have to make sure that male genitalia is strong, powerful, and packs a punch, while female genitalia is like a wet rag. Funny how that works.
> Moistening the folds of his own vagina
*Vulva. The vagina is on the inside.
> How did we ever do this before?
Your soggy pussy, that's what. It clearly was wet enough to take that rolling pin inside it no problem.
> Viktor's fingers encircled it at the base
> Feeling the thickness he could barely wrap his hand around
How are you encircling it, then? Guess your hands are just that uwu smol that it can't wrap around that epic 4'' circumference.
> Jayce's musky, masculine scent
Meaning...? No, I want to know. What do you MEAN by a 'masculine scent'? Are we implying that we know what men are, now?
> It was bigger than he remembered. He could barely take half of it before feeling the pressure against the back of his throat
Once again - this will be the third smut scene. We know how big that manly male cock is. You weren't exactly fucking in pitch darkness, either.
You are going to need shot glasses for 'pleasure' and 'growl', because that's all this manly male penis-haver does.
> Then came more, strong and abundant, filling his mouth as Jayce moaned his name
I bet you could spice a cognac with it.
You're supposed to see him as some sort of siren, but all I can see is Ariana Grande with shorter hair. BTW, Viktor's leg is just fine even after Salo broke it (remember that scene? I do).
> I was afraid this wouldn't happen, that you wouldn't be by my side
You shot a nigga and got to collect her head. That's one way to get a drug lord to forgive the fact you stole his 'son' from the throne.
> Still semi-hard and damp against his stomach
Must be the Bridgerton radium he drank in his coffee. I suppose it's better than him ejaculating, never losing hardness, and going back at it as if men don't have a refractory period.
> So wet
Almost as if he has a soggy pussy.
> Clinging tightly to his husband's broad shoulders
I bet you can't tell who the AFAB and AMAB is. Hint: it's the tall, handsome one with big shoulders and the physique of a Greek statue.
> Let out a low growl
Drink. That's the second time he's done that.
> I didn't think you'd enjoy them
I didn't think he'd still have feeling in them after his aethernox SRS, but I guess we're just gonna have to use our imaginations, eh?
> Listen to how wet you are
Me when I talk to my Scrub Daddy
> Noticed that Jayce's dick was fully hard again
White soggy pussy be hittin' different.
> Let out a frustrated, excited growl
This is the third time he's done that.
> I know your pussy is open for me, dripping all over my fingers
He says, with all the enthusiasm of presenting a Filet O Fish.
> The wet, obscene sound
Sounds like we need a ShamWow here.
> Giving him the appearance of one of those marble statues
You KNOW it's a hetslop when not only do you have a bodice ripper scene, the manly male XY penis-owner is described like a Greek statue. It NEVER fails.
> He took his wrists in one hand and pinned them above his head against the mattress
Add this, too. His itsy bitsy hands are nothing compared to the rough, work-hewn man hands.
> His pale skin, the moles across his body, his narrow waist
We know he's an uwu Victorian tuberculosis boi with a waist so small your thumbs meet in the middle.
> His swollen, glistening pussy from the built-up arousal
But is it soggy? That is the question.
> The warmth of being seen and desired in that way made him lose his shame
You have already fucked twice. How do you STILL have shame after having out-of-wedlock sex the first two times?
> Wrapped around the base of Jayce's hot dick
Oh? I thought it was so big you couldn't wrap your fingers around it at all?
> He clenched his teeth when the pain came. Still, he kept going down inch by inch...until he finally took him all the way in
Again. They had sex TWICE. He was penetrated twice. He is no longer a virgin.
> You're so big
We know, you said that already when you gave him a blowjob.
> Jayce growled
He has growled five times already.
> Jayce felt and saw clearly the small bulge beneath his palm, the subtle shape of his own member pressing from within
Manly male penises can punch out pooner stomach's like a hole puncher, whereas pooners get to sit home and embroider and hope they can get pregnant. Ain't that something.
> I can feel it...I can see you taking me completely
You don't need to say it twice. The sight of your dick carving out his insides is good enough.
> You go so deep. You fill me so well
See point above.
> With a deep growl
> Jayce growled
I am losing count already. I'm gonna need a tally by the end.
> Hitting Viktor's most sensitive spot
He ain't just 'hitting' it, he's slamming into it like an Israeli missile.
Do you remember that tumblr meme where 'all women want is to be fucked in a Victorian greenhouse'? Turns out it actually came true:
> Didn't want to think of them as total-pleasure seekers, but it sure seemed that way
You don't say.
> Had never imagined that his body could bend in so many ways
Me neither. I thought he needed a cane to walk and his spine was slowly deteriorating. Turns out, alpha male cock and semen has magical properties that allow you to become a Cirque de Soleil performer.
> Reading about material relevant to their research and future projects
Oh wow! I never thought this plot line would be mentioned again!
> Viktor was sure no one would ever satisfy him the way Jayce did
Having that masculine musk and masculine penis works wonders, doesn't it?
> His waist was the most tempting part of his body and he couldn't help but wrap his hands around it
I'll count this as 'his waist was so small his thumbs met in the middle'.
Yep, there's your tumblr meme. Every Victorian hetslop has to have a greenhouse sex session.
To think he was a sheltered genius who was named Diamond of the Season; that he was willing to change the world with new technology and became a scientific partner only to get embroiled in a royal assassination plot, be accused of regicide (and never suffer consequences for that accusation), have secretive sex in a tavern and hide the fact you are no longer a virgin from your royal family, and end it all as a housewife who embroiders and checks napkins. How very feminist.
During the next scene, Jayce and Viktor eat their luncheon and read their letters. William and Sky - who is apparently white in this - are attending them. Viktor remarks that Powder will kill him as he has not answered her letters in over two weeks (too busy fucking, it seems), while they get piles of letters from everyone else celebrating and congratulating their marriage. While he has been enjoying the sex, Sky - and you really have to admire how the author made her, the token black woman, The Help in this - plops a huge leather bound volume on the table. In its are all the administrative notes, taxes, and information regarding collections. Turns out, their weeks of love affairs have drained the house dry; they need twelve new bed sheet sets, bundles of flowers that need to be replaced every three days, and candles, because despite Jayce's desire to electrify the world with his technology, they still use candles the old-fashioned way (and not a single gas-powered lamp is to be seen, btw).
Later, Viktor reads one of Powder's letters: everything is going fine at home; Silco has not blown a gasket in two weeks, having secured some more deals with Piltovan nobility, and Vi might be appointed ambassador between the two cities so she can see Caitlyn again. Ekko is now head of the Royal Guard and has gotten a new uniform. He writes her a three-page letter giving apologies, and notes that he will talk to Jayce about Vi being the new ambassador.
In the next letter, we get a missive from Lady Knightley, a noble who gushes about how wonderful he looked on Jayce's arm and whether we will be seeing any new Talis heirs running around, mentioning that Talis is 'vigorous' and it 'won't take long'. This leaves him cold and numb, since the aethernox took away his ability to procreate (so it is said, watch it be retconned), and he mulls over telling Jayce this truth that he already knew from speaking to Silco.
The following letter comes from Jhin, who, instead of being a murderer who views it as an art form, is a 'seahorse dad'. He invites him to the Adamant Club, something that is now open to him since he is married, and that he hopes to become good friends with Viktor as they share similar interests. Viktor responds to his letter, accepting the request, saying he hopes he will live up to his 'high opinion'.
Then, we jump to Jayce's POV, where he is dealing with the duties of a Viscount: approving tenants and construction projects, denying others that might affect other properties or crops, and then a set dealing with investment deals and one from a nouveau riche that he doesn't want to deal with as if that isn't how he got this fortune. In the middle of that, he's thinking about Viktor writing his letters, how serious he gets when writing them, and hopes he can get done with his work so he can steal a kiss 'or more than a kiss' if Viktor is in the mood. Unfortunately, a new letter with his family crest shows up, and he opens it. Turns out, it's a letter documenting that Salo has returned to Piltover after staying in Targon - and that's halfway across the continent, mind you - and is hiding out in 'less reputable areas'. To him, Salo is like a bad weed, showing up where he doesn't belong, threatening the months of peace between him and his husband as well as testing the waters between him and Silco. He burns the letter via candleflame, and then Viktor comes in.
They chitchat; Jayce asks him how Powder is doing, and he says that she wants them to play matchmaker between Vi and Cait. He also brings up that Jhin wants to meet with him and potentially become friends; he is described as 'sociable and friendly', which is the exact opposite of what Jhin actually is. But that isn't the real issue; Viktor brings up the letter Lady Knightley wrote about having heirs, and confesses that he can't have any. He starts getting upset, but Jayce grabs his hands and tells him to look at him, saying that he didn't marry him for heirs, he married him for him. Then Viktor asks what will happen to the Talis family name once he is gone. He tells him not to worry, and we get another smut scene - sorta. We have the classic 'man swipes his hand and sends everything off the table to the floor' scene before he can 'show' Viktor how much he means to him in his office. The vase full of flowers, thankfully, is not knocked over for once - according to Sky (who is white), they broke four vases that they then had to clean after they were done.
Then we get to all the tea with the servants: Diane, one of the housekeepers, noted that she spied the Viscount fucking Viktor against a wall and had to do the sign of the cross to erase the image from her mind. William, the butler, also notes how 'focused' Jayce gets during sex, not noticing him when he fucked Viktor in the drawing room. Sky says they are sweet and that it would be so nice to experience something like that. To that I say, sorry Sky, but you're black (?), and we don't want niggers in yaoi. And just to jinx things, the vase indeed gets broken.
We then get a snippet from Lady Masemar; our newlyweds haven't been seen in a month and their XXX-rated activities have reached her ears. She won't snitch like that, though; that's only for announcing their marriage when they didn't want it to be announced in the first place. She also notes that a Lord Basinger is fucking prostitutes while his wife had triplets. This universe allows open trans people, but it seemingly doesn't think prostitution should be abolished or women's rights worth keeping.
> God, society must think we're sex addicts
No shit. You fuck like rabbits but you sure don't breed like 'em.
> He didn't even remember how Viktor had ended up like this if they hadn't had sex that afternoon
One admires how his entire arc ends with him just taking dick all day. He went from being an independent person to being a broodmare. How progressive.
> You know, because of everything that came with being the future king
Bridgerton is based in England. Why are you speaking French, the language of Le Grande Ennemi? The abolition of French as a court language happened in 1730. This takes place in 1815.
> He could have him at his complete disposal as often as he wanted. Unrestricted access to the love he had so longed to feel
That's nice. It's a shame that that is how your entire character arc ended.
In case you're wondering...yes, they do fuck on the piano. And the lid slams down.
> I didn't know you played so well
He just told you he took lessons even though he hated them.
> Lifted him and sat him on the piano lid
This lid is open, btw. Those things can go from 20-45 lbs.
> You sound better than any ballad
Please stop with the cringeworthy sex talk.
> His eyes darkened as he gazed at his husband's flushed intimacy
*Glistening, soggy pussy
> Every time Viktor's fingers clenched the edge of the piano or tangled in his hair
> The piano lid shut with a loud thud
Then he should have fallen down with it, as he was sat up on an angle. He's lucky he didn't get his fingers crushed.
> Between gentle circles around the clitoris
Very scientific.
> Growling contentedly
I really have lost count of how many times he has growled. He is literally incapable of making any other sound.
> Leaning back against the piano lid
It's closed? You're lying against a flat surface, now.
> So that his legs hung over the sides of the keyboard
> The movement caused Viktor's feet to press down on several keys at once
He must have great mobility if he is splayed horizontally across that piano. Or are his feet resting on the keys? I'm having difficulty imagining this position.
> I want to play with you a little longer...and with this
Here I thought he was going to serenade us with his dick on that piano, Zelenskyy-style.
> His legs pressed more keys on the piano, creating a chaotic, erotic melody
> Those disordered notes
Not only is he playing the keys with Roblox legs, the sound is both 'chaotic' and 'erotic'. Try not to rape my ears visually, yeah?
> You're going to wake everyone up if you keep moving like that
I think they heard those God awful notes already.
> Here I was waiting to fuck you on the couch
Well know you have to clean out his pussy juice from the keys. Nice.
> Let out a low growl
Seriously, have him make ANY OTHER noise. This is all he does!
> Feeling Viktor's hot, slippery walls clamp tightly around him
"Yeah, your pussy is clenching around me like piano wire"
> Filled him all the way to the hilt
Cliché.
> Growled in response
What did I just say?
> Lifting Viktor's legs and pushing them back until his knees almost touched his shoulders
> Opening himself obscenely for him, his legs bent and raised above his head
Disability doesn't exist nor matter when you're about to get dicked down by a Victorian Latin Lover.
> His pussy was completely exposed, glistening with arousal and throbbing
But was it soggy?
> His pussy squeezed him tightly, sucking him in with every withdrawal and taking him in greedily
It wouldn't be sucking him in if he was withdrawing it, now would it?
> You feel incredible like this. Can you feel it?
Bitch I can make an Etch-a-Sketch with your dick. You tell me.
There's the 'squirting and vaginal ejaculation' you've come - get it? - to expect. Look at that display of semen. Such Victorian virility!
> I thought it would be when you see me open to you, based on what you said a few moments ago
What?
As it happens, the bad news is not about Salo. Jayce has been summoned back to the House of Lords, meaning their honeymoon is over. Viktor, no longer an heir apparent, now must stay home and do wifely - er, husbandly? - duties. Jayce doesn't really want to face Piltover society on his own, but the real tragedy lies with Viktor. He has to talk with Ximena about his new duties - and there is considerable wink wink 'did you nudge nudge' as well - and that includes hosting balls. See, he can take balls just fine, he just can't organize them; they're too big for his 'feminine' brain, or something.
In any case, this chapter ends with Jayce learning where Salo is: he is still at the brothels, spending his time with 'someone else'. Jonathan tells him that the weapons room has been expanded, but that he won't sully his hands with Salo's blood because he doesn't deserve it - despite watching Ambessa commit suicide and then saw off her head to deliver to Silco. Instead of having a mini plot point where Jhin can eliminate him, the author straight up admits she had no idea who he was, had to look into his League lore, and change his psychopathic nature into a happy-go-lucky one! Imagine that: an author who dives into things with little to no research - like thinking opal is a good conductor of electricity - and wrote things like 'soggy pussy' would have a SNAFU! I can't wait to see how this ends - IF it ends.
The pregnant-by-my-big-dicked-teacher AU from BSwaves/bruhthatsgay has been finished. I didn't do a chapter-by-chapter review on the last installments because they were short and nothing really happens in them. I'll be summarizing their contents in the spoiler below.
After finalizing his adoption and getting closer to Dmitri, Viktor is now 27 weeks pregnant with a daughter, something he predicted he would have. He is largely bed bound, but still goes to school; Coach Sevika allows him to go to the library rather than participate in gym class. In Chapter 11, Jayce appears out of nowhere, still trying to get involved in the life of the student he knocked up. When Dmitri stands up for him, Jayce bares his teeth and growls like an animal, pulling the usual, 'who the fuck are you?' before getting the hint - and catching a crowd of curious students, who threaten to call the cops on him- and yelling 'this isn't over!' when he pulls out of the parking lot. This time around, Viktor doesn't just have Dmitri on his side, but Elora, Mel, and his mother, who all agree this is stalking and harassment (Jayce actually stalked Viktor enough until he avoided the library altogether). However, he does not want to call the cops nor announce that the baby is Jayce's, because the last thing we need is to paint the handsome, big-dicked teacher as a sex offender.
In Chapter 12, as Viktor's belly grows bigger, he asks Dmitri 'what are we?' in regards to their relationship. Viktor has never been in a relationship like this, where someone accepts him for who he is, and does not mind that he is pregnant with another man's child. After some snuggling and talking, they agree to be boyfriends.
However, Viktor's wishes of keeping the baby's father a secret has been thrown out the window, as nearly everyone at his school knows, yet does not report on it. He now has to move around in a wheelchair and can skip two days out of the week, doing the work at home, as his pregnancy nears completion. Viktor and Dmitri make it official; they seem to have a wholesome relationship, even if the narrative paints Jayce as the 'Lusty Latin Lover' with a larger penis who can get things done. Viktor still dreads seeing any dark SUV, thinking it's Jayce, and despite having his life irrevocably changed with the pregnancy, he can't find it in him to hate Jayce. Yes, he is living that meme of, 'How your girlfriend looks at you when you tell her to block her rapist'. Pretty privilege works wonders.
As for Dmitri and Viktor, they look to get a little touchy feely. Dmitri then begins fingering Viktor's vagina - after asking if this and that is okay, and all - and Viktor is nice and tight down there, not getting any action for months after he swelled up like a whale. Dmitri, thankfully, is experienced; he's a popular boy, he's had girlfriends and boyfriends, and he manages to jerk Viktor off without waking up his mother. After they finish, they agree to get some fast food, but there's a problem afoot: a horn honks outside his house, and wouldn't you know it? It's Jayce again, there like a kicked puppy, asking if he can be in his daughter's life. When Viktor tells him that their daughter will be sent to a loving family rather than be raised by a disabled 16-year-old, Jayce then asks why he, the rapist, doesn't get custody (and in multiple states, he CAN seek custody). He asks if he can 'feel' his daughter, and this teenager, unaware that they have been groomed, allows him, and after Jayce cops a feel, he sneaks - read: steals - a kiss. Luckily, Viktor's badass mama comes out, cane a-swingin', and ends up taking out Jayce's back windshield. She was aiming for him and his head, but the sneaky Mexican was too fast. Try Border Patrol next time.
In Chapter 13, Viktor finally gives birth. Initially, his water breaks in the middle of class, and he gets EMS called and everything. Of course, just to add insult to injury, Viktor texts Dmitri, but calls Jayce so he can be there for the birth of his child. He stands there and acts like a devoted father, not at all the image of a creepy stalker who groomed and impregnated a teenager - oh, btw, NONE of the nurses find that that's weird when they invite the 'father' of the child and find out he's a grown-ass man - holding him through the contractions and telling him how great he's doing. When the child comes out, it has Jayce's black hair and Viktor's golden eyes - those Hispanic genes sure are strong - and she is no longer his 'parasite'. Then, as if to insult everyone's intelligence, Jayce says that he's been 'acting like a psycho' lately, and what does Viktor do? He forgives him. Yeah! After having his life tormented and ruined all thanks to this Latin Lover's humungous schlong, he's going to forgive him. At the end, after Mel and Elora shows up, he wonders if 'Jayce would make a good dad'. Perhaps you should have thought of that BEFORE he raped, impregnated, groomed and stalked you.
In the final chapter, it has been four years since Viktor gave birth. His daughter, Evey, is living her best life with Mel and Elora. And what is our Viktor doing? Cheating on Dmitri, who has done nothing wrong, with Jayce, who sends him a selfie with an erection in his pants. After all that drama, buildup, and condemnation of Jayce as a disgusting groomer, our grooming victim decides to embrace the teenage slut archetype and go with the man who raped and impregnated them. He really is the 'Obsession' meme that was making the rounds a while ago. He was assaulted and groomed and that's oh so bad, but don't tell him to leave the man who raped him, that's even worse!
Oh, and did you know there was supposed to be a 'closeted gay man' arc in this? Do tell me how Jayce is a homosexual man if he wants to be in his daughter's life after he knocked up the birthing person. He's a groomer, sure, but he's not a gay one. Words have meaning - and if you're hot, you don't get punished by the narrative. Hot rapists can send you selfies and be loved by the audience, because who doesn't love sexually aggressive dick?
The Thing: Slime Edition has been updated. We are now halfway through this AGP nightmare. This is a very long chapter, and while I tried to summarize most of it, it had excessive amounts of 'WTFuckery', so proceed at your own risk.
> White with pink trim around the sleeves and collar
This is supposed to give you a 'feminine-friendly' experience, but this guy openly admitted to wanting his own vagina. It's an AGP falling in love with a pooner. Quite the combo.
> I don't actually think you'll need it
Yes, he will. Anything involving dilating the cervix needs numbing. Nerves do, in fact, exist up there.
> IV full of electrolytes and sugar water
You could've just injected him with Gatorade and gotten the same result.
> Pregnant person
You'll call pregnant rats 'female' but humans? Pregnant people, vagina owners, vulva owners, etc
> Once it's gotten going
Ah, the peculiarities of English.
> I don't know how long it will take for the contractions to start
Almost as if testing on mice and not humans will bring you here, eh?
> It is not as bad as I thought it would be
In earlier chapters he was in the bathtub, feverish and groaning in pain, almost heading to the ER because of the contractions. Don't retcon those experiences now.
> I was happy that someone like you wasn't going to be held back anymore
Aw, what a feminist. Totally not coming from a nefarious state of mind at all! It isn't like he's researching those slimes in the hope they can give him a vagina, no sir!
> Why slimes, of all methods of pain relief?
You're getting a flashback where a mountain man gives him 'mountain salts' - aka mountain slimes - to 'cure' him of hypothermia. He's 8-years-old, btw.
I'd like to remind you that this all happens when he's 8-years-old, and he's getting a euphoric experience from a slime trawling through his intestines.
> It is a man
And you know that because...? You can't assume someone's gender like that.
This is where Jayce got the inspiration to use slimes on AFABs: after a mysterious mountain man (Mage Viktor?) made him eat a mountain slime that healed his injuries while taking up stock inside his intestines like it's E. coli. None of the doctors know what's wrong with him, and don't seem to pay attention to a minor's stomach inflating despite little food intake. It's OK, though: this is all very exciting to him.
> I wish I had a vagina like yours!
He's not joking about that. As an honorary AGP, his entire research practice involves him researching the slimes so he can get a true and honest vagina vs a stinkditch. He's less interested in Viktor as a person vs wanting his very own homegrown pussy.
> I do not read much
The genius who spends his time reading research doesn't read? Press X to doubt.
> I have a potential containment breach on my hands
Yeah, even SCP 106 doesn't want to deal with your bullshit.
> They smell really strongly of citric acid and are yellow so you know, lemon
I'm sure they do great with one's vaginal pH.
> They find a female, mammalian host and implant themselves
> They suck the eggs out and remove all Mullerian structures
> They permanently transition the female host to a male one, including developing Wolffian structures
Well, would you look at that. A plot that actually involves transitioning a human's sex, bizarre slime mold aside? I can see why Viktor would want that one vs the pregnancy one.
> Jayce has apparently has the world's most effective transitional method in his lab and he won't test it
I'll say. He'd be one of the richest men on Runeterra with those things.
> They lose their reproductive organs and grow something kind of in-between
So. Intersex. You have trans slimes, intersex slimes, and 'uwu fuck me alpha' slimes. Watch him get the lime pie slimes instead.
Knowing that this is some kind of body horror, he ain't getting that dick anytime soon - not one of his own, at least.
Someone has a fetish. He's already been fisted once by those hands and he wants to get one more try in before he'll only have his asshole.
> Tonguing his cervix
So do those slimes have a taste like a Sour Patch Kids, or...?
> It's my first time doing it with a human
> His life is mortifying
I'll say. You already had a nightmare over giving birth to rats that eat your family. It can't get any worse, right?
> Vividly imagines himself in the same chair coaching him through pushing out an actual baby
To be fair, you are...just not a human one. It's like you're giving birth to SCP 999 but it isn't cutesy or happy or fill you with joy.
> Feeling like his uterus is trying to vomit
You can't convince me the pain threshold is only a 3. That sounds painful, fancy clitorus-sucking device aside.
> Feels like his brain is being drained out through his pussy
Usually I'd laugh at lines like these, but in this context, it is quite literal: he's having some stretchy, volatile organism sucked through him. I'm simply amazed he isn't being sucked inside out.
> Orgasm is potentially viable addition to existing methods of removal
Something tells me that making female rats orgasm doesn't have the same oomph as this method.
It ain't just afterbirth, you're pushing out an SCP. The Foundation is ready to be summoned.
Well, with that horrorshow done, surely he won't be repeating it again, right? Riiiiiiiiiight?
I wonder why an AFAB would like a clitoral and cervical stimulator. Such a mystery.
> What a privileged life he leads, to have someone as special as Dr. Viktor Lane on his couch in a sterile gown and panties, getting pumped with slime mucin
...he really did inject him with the super breeder slimes, didn't he?
> Jayce knows that Viktor felt like it did, but he never even got to the point equivalent to 12 weeks
It seemed far longer than that, and he DID say he had to wait that long because the daughter slimes would not have split yet.
> Pregnant person
"Female mammal" has a better ring to it, yeah?
> He thinks Viktor would look so cute with a baby in his belly!
You know he's thinking 'Me, too!' because he also wants to have a vagina, uterus and cervix to give birth with. He wants to be a woman, Viktor wants to be a real man...it's poetry, really.
> He'd start to glow, with that beautiful blush in his ears and chest
He was suffering while pregnant with a slime. What makes you think he's going to waddle around with a baby in his condition? That spine is snapping like a Brazilian bungee cord.
> Viktor would be so beautiful as he finally cries happy tears of relief
Would he be crying, or would YOU be crying because you wanted to be the one who got pregnant?
> Wishing so badly he could rub Viktor's cute belly
*Wishing he could have Viktor's cute belly
He's lucky he's numbed because that shit WOULD hurt.
> Mucus plug
Yeah that's another slime. You know he wants the purple one, but he's getting the super pregger strain.
They end up buying food, an 'in-house specialty' which is just a fancy burger and fries with special sauce. As they eat, Viktor asks if Jayce has had any other test subjects. He says no, and Viktor remarks that he did not think Jayce would be so 'monogamous', which is an odd term to use. Either way, Viktor offers to help this AGP doctor who wants his own vagina, as he thinks the transition slimes would be life-saving for trans people, as it would actually involve them properly changing sex. Jayce also has proper fertility control and abortion slimes, making pregnancy creation and termination easier. It's too big a venture to pass up. He tells Jayce that he has degrees in microbiology, immunology, biochemistry, human structural anatomy and even neurobiology, fields that Jayce finds impressive, but Viktor remarks that none of them are as important as lending his vagina for the slime implants. While he didn't like the birth control slime, he is willing to use the others, and Jayce is overjoyed at the fact that he now has a walking vagina to test his slimes. He hugs him, says he could 'kiss him if he could' and there begins their proper venture.
Later, Jayce offers to take Viktor home to his apartment. Viktor initially asks why, and Jayce says that it is late; too late for Sky to come and pick Viktor up, too late for public transit to pick him up, and too late for a walk home. It takes 1 hour and 45 minutes to reach Viktor's apartment by car; after weighing his options, he asks if he can stay at Jayce's apartment, which is 20 minutes away, until he can catch the earliest bus to reach his family reunion. Jayce suddenly acts cagey because he can't just let him sleep on his couch! But, after weighing his options, he agrees to take Viktor there - if he also promises not to examine or inject anything into Viktor's vagina. He agrees, and they head to his apartment.
As they talk the elevator to Jayce's floor, Viktor doesn't feel well. He says he 'ate too much', but nothing comes out of it; rather, he focuses more on how the apartment uses key cards to open apartments, wondering if it's a security risk. Jayce says he 'doesn't think much about it' and lets him in. He offers to let Viktor sleep in his room after locking it, but Viktor refuses. There's a back and forth between them over who should get the bed, but Viktor eventually agrees to take Jayce's bed after he sees the couch - a large L-shaped hand-me-down that looks and sounds pretty comfy - and settles in. Before he falls asleep, he even says that Jayce's sheets 'smell like him', bringing Jayce out of his brief trance of theoretical transportation.
Called it. Viktor wanted the violet one, but Jayce gave him the super-pregger one, meaning those dreams of his popping out rats at his family reunion will become reality.
> His beautiful, puffy pussy
I can't tell if he's aroused by it because he wants to fuck it, or because he wants it for himself.
> Trans man wants the slime that would actually give him a penis
> Gets injected with one that causes their female instincts to go into overdrive, demanding to be impregnated and forced to be a host of never-ending, insatiable pregnancy slimes
Pottery. At least that 'lovely womb' will be used for the greater good, right?
I'm sure triplets would go GREAT with his disability. It's not going to impact his quality of life at all, no sir.
There's supposed to be some sexual tension here - Jayce is wearing a too-small towel, Viktor is wearing overly large clothes - and he offers him his shower and other clothes for our slime mama-to-be. Jayce's apartment has a separate shower and bathtub, with the tub being shiny white as it is barely used. There are also used cum tissues in the garbage, so that's nice to see (they're described as 'bouquets'). Viktor then takes the time to appreciate how his stomach is smooth and flat again, and ponders whether he should masturbate in Jayce's shower. He shampoos and conditions his hair, and Jayce knocks to inform him he's got some leftover clothes for him. He gives him boxer briefs from a fresh pack, and while they are a little loose, they 'feel great' on his pussy.
He gets dressed, and then sits down to have breakfast. Jayce asks him how he's feeling; he responds that he is still sensitive and fatigued.
> Even as he sits there his pussy feels over sensitive, throbbing
Gee, it couldn't possibly be because the guy you thought you trusted stuck a needle up your 'pretty pussy' and injected super-pregger slimes. I wonder if that has anything to do with this upcoming folic acid rant.
The gene mutation he's likely referring to is MTHFR - which honestly sounds like 'motherfucker', which is fitting - meaning he has an increased risk of blood clots and cardiovascular disease. The slime that never left his intestinal tract appears to do the heavy lifting in regulating his folic acid intake.
> Anyone who can get pregnant
> The slime only works like this on female mammals
Lol. Lmao.
I wonder why the slime that causes pregnancy in AFABs is so much nicer to male intestines. Are our slimes TERFs?
> Something feels off
Something tells me he's going to be jumping on that dick to propagate that MTHFR gene and other cardiovascular risks. 'Breed me alpha' takes on a whole new meaning.
Because you got the lime slimes, baby boi.
> Be Mexican
> Get called a mule
Yeah, that fits. He's a drug mule, if you want to be specific with it - a specialized, slime pharmaceutical one. Walter 'Slime' White if you will.
They reunion continues as planned, but Jinx is the one who wonders why Jayce is there. She even remarks that Cait is 'too pale' for she and Jayce to be siblings; to brush off this racial SNAFU, they try to say that he's woke and cool because he has 'two moms' while Jinx had 'three dads'. As for Viktor, he feels like he's going to 'birth a small animal', not too dissimilar to the rats coming out of his hooha in his dream.
The food they serve is the usual stuff you see at events like these: fresh cheeses, crackers, meat, bowls of mini cookies and chips with various dips, neatly cut sandwiches, and large salads. Vander comes out and tells Powder that she needs to tend the bar as he speaks with Cait and Vi, and Viktor tells him not to call her that. When Jayce inquires about the names, Viktor says that an 'accident' happened when Powder was young, leading to Vander receiving extensive injuries that required surgery. Her guilt over the incident led her to change her name. Vi, by contrast, went to jail, for the crime of getting away from her siblings and kicking an Enforcer in the nuts for arresting her for...standing there and doing nothing. It happened on the same night when everyone was wondering what hurt Vander, and she ended up looking like the prime suspect. ACAB and all that.
Ekko is then introduced, ratty shirt and fading green dye streak in his hair, and asks who Jayce is. He says he is Cait's brother; at his confused look, he also has to clarify that he is her foster brother.
I noticed that Jinx and Jayce speak with the same syntax and diction, almost as if they're the same 'person'. Getting a character's voice right in fanfic can be tricky if you aren't committed. One appreciates Jayce's lack of boundaries as well; on top of injecting him with super pregger slime, he makes public remarks on scar tissue on his cervix. Well done.
> Patient
*Patent. These little rebels are going to do it their way, by introducing the tech to the people because those greedy billionaires shouldn't hoard that tech - not unlike our slime scientist here who injects it into unwilling patients, right? They don't want to be bootlickers and want to change things away from FDA approvals while they juggle three jobs. Mylo and Claggor then come in, and they are also confused as to why they didn't take that free money.
Mylo then notices Jayce and Viktor, and asks how the latter is doing. He introduces Jayce as his partner - he inwardly remarks how he put a slime up his vagina, but does not say that out loud - and Mylo notes that Gert said he was 'seeing someone'. Before Viktor can press on that, Claggor comes in, asking about Sky. She is doing well; she's about to go on vacation to visit manatees she is currently overseeing. She is invested in a captive breeding program that is finally seeing them released into the wild, as well as river and environmental cleanup. Ekko makes a hippie comment about how it shouldn't be up to the zoo to clean things up, but the factories that dump their pollution in the river, and how nature will fix itself yadda yadda...when he leaves to take a phone call, everyone enters gossip mode.
Mylo, loudly whispering, asks Jayce if Viktor has 'told him about it'. Both of them are confused, and Mylo is triumphant over exclusive knowledge he has. Viktor zones out of the conversation - Jinx herself is getting annoyed - and thinks about ethics in science; he makes more money with Jayce than he does at Heimerdinger's lab, and he gets the seed of doubt that his research on viral gene therapy will never get approved due to ethical constraints. A fight then ensues - over what, I don't fucking know, Jinx told Mylo to 'stop lying' and lunged at him - and Viktor gets salted chips thrown in their eyes. The fight is broken up by Vander, who tells Mylo to go to his room, because Viktor's tiny voice was never heard over punches thrown. He did, however, get elbowed in the eye by Jinx, something Jayce has to treat with a cold can on it. Ouch.
That's right: you injected preggy slime molds into a drug lord's son.
> I wouldn't hurt Viktor on purpose
You injected slime mold up his 'pretty pussy' because you were turned on by the idea he wouldn't stop ovulating and would shit out triplets.
> What's wrong with my dreams?
> They're fucking weird!
She's not wrong about that. Jayce has told Mel and Caitlyn he also fantasizes about getting pregnant and giving birth to whatever monstrosities is cooking up that anus. 'Weird' is a very, very nice way of putting it.
Mogged by a schizo girl's elbow, you hate to see it.
We can't even spell 'liar' correctly? Where the fuck is your autocorrect? You want people to masturbate to this work yet I encourage you to stop masturbating to your shitty grammar.
>Meaningless platitudes
> He has nothing but empty platitudes
You said the same thing twice.
> A squeak forced from him like he's been squeezed
He's doing this in front of everyone, btw; they are just too busy arguing to hear this uterus owner squeak in their chair.
His femoral and sciatic nerves are fucked NOW - imagine how they're gonna feel when he's got five lime slimes cooking in that uterus. That's not going to affect his health at all, I'm sure.
> Even if the skin he touched isn't particularly sanitary
Yeah, can you imagine if the pooner skin you touched was biohazardous? Thank God he's not using testosterone creams to become his true self; he's too broke for that shit.
> The confusion must show on Jayce's face
Man obsessed with pregnancy is confused by pregnancy? Whaaa?
In the business we call this foreshadowing. He might not be plopping out rats, but he will be pushing out some...interesting confectionaries.
Vi? Try Mylo - he's the one starting shit. We also find out the specific reason for the fight: he was spreading rumours Viktor might be pregnant, and this set Jinx off.
I, too, find it weird how Gert would start spilling the beans to Mylo, who would then spill the beans to Jinx, who would then fly off the handle and turn on Viktor for getting pregnant at her wedding. Little do they know he ain't pregnant with humans.
> That doesn't mean I'd instantly know!
You do, though? You were following his pseudo-pregnancy the entire time? You shoved a fancy sex toy/suction cup inside his vagina?
> You mean he could be getting one soon
What procedure? If he was preparing for surgery, why did he consent to a slime that mimics pregnancy to prevent ovulation? One of these things is not like the other.
Here is what I think is going to happen:
- Doggo will detect Viktor's pregnancy before Viktor realizes what's happening
- He will become a horny sex pest that will beg Jayce to fuck and impregnate him as the slimes multiply
- He will become a 'cum-drunk slut' who will endure several rounds of back-breaking smut because 'It's Just Biology, Bro'
- He will not gain access to the slime he wants because we need the trans man impregnated with super pregger slime to 'fuck the woman' back into them
- Jayce will eventually announce his pregnancy fetish and ingest some slimes himself, or leave that completely up to the female mammal he considers a partner
- Just when Viktor thinks he will be cured, another slime will be injected inside him, continuing the cycle
- Write bizarre smut that you think people will wank to
I called out the lime slime plot. That was too easy. I assume the rest will fall into place as this Slither AU marches on.
This next entry is written by an out-and-proud Shotacon, because nothing says 'Pride' like the intersection of queerness and pedophilia. The youngest they have gone in their fics is an 8-year-old with a 21-year-old. This one, luckily (and I am stressing that) is a sixteen-year-old who lusts after their uncle AND father. It is also very culturally accurate as it has two Hispanics (well, two mutts, if we're being honest) fucking their own offspring. Lines for this fic include:
- I think I'd love it more if there was a hole in your bottoms so I could shove a finger up there.
- His eyes widen when he sees his cock hanging between his legs. It looked long. Long like in the porn videos he liked to watch. He looks away. He feels himself get hot as he thinks of getting fucked with that thing.
- He can feel his face heating up as he imagines his dad pumping his fingers in and out harshly, stretching him out before putting that monster of a cock inside him. God, he imagined he'd be so full. It makes him dizzy.
- Daddy—I want…I want your—cock. Cock. Please I want you to fuck me
Gio refers to Giopara, who is white with blue eyes. In this, he's also half-Mexican - and so is Viktor. Gotta keep it in the familia.
> You like her, right
> Yeah
"Niggers could be here," he thought, "right here in this campground."
> Viktor can't help but stare. His arms are so big...he so desperately wants to be manhandled by Jayce. He'd do it with ease
It is every pooner's desire to be manhandled and fucked by a proper male with a well-endowed penis. Add on the familial element and it makes you wonder if they're turned on by their own dad.
> His hands could fit around his whole waist
His waist was uwu so smol those big yaoi hands could meet in the middle. I will be adding that to the collection.
> He has them more than he'd like - such nasty thoughts about his own dad. He can't help it though. He's hot
Pretty privilege strikes again. If we didn't have the Sexy Latino Dad and instead had the actual Latino genes show up - gunt included - this wouldn't be as appealing to the audience. If you want fathers to fuck their own daughters-turned-sons, make them hot, and shotacons will be kissing your feet.
> Too bad your squirt over here can't help
Oh I'm sure there's another way to make that 'squirt' help.
> He's gonna be grown soon and I haven't seen him since he was this tall
Were you lusting after the 13-year-old too? Usually they wait until the quinceañera, but 16 is ripe enough, I guess.
> Gio is significantly paler than Jayce
> He was paler than his dad as well
Those white genes coming in clutch for once. Something tells me that if he looked as dark as an Amerindian this wouldn't be as popular.
He's gonna be a Disney Princess of his own with how many wands are ending up in his -ahem- hidden places.
He's watching him eat that s'more so he can calculate how big his jaw can stretch for his double-dick blowjob session. Watch.
> Still a virgin in...everything
This is a very weird thing to talk about in front of an incestuous parent who looks at you like you're a piece of fuckable meat.
> All Viktor can focus on is Jayce's hand in his, big and warm
A hand so big his thumbs can meet in the middle of your uwu waist.
> Stepping into the men's room
> Immediately gets sexually propositioned by a male (his own father)
> Gets told not to wear shorts because they are too sexually suggestive
> It's OK though because Daddy is hot and we masturbate to Daddy
> Glaring at Vi
They always hate other women, because women are the ones who catch on to their nefarious actions first.
> Arching his back a bit, hoping to appeal to him
He's trying to mimic a scene from 'American Beauty', but there's literally nothing back there. You trying to tempt your daddy with scoliosis?
> He goes as quickly as he can, not wanting his dad to miss him pulling down his pants to reveal his underwear
Wouldn't you try to go slower if you wanted this to be a strip tease?
> Why would his dad watch him undress
Why did you try to 'appeal' to your father by trying to undress sexily? You're 16.
Mm yes, nothing like a space heater in a giant nylon tent. Imagine the smell. Also, isn't it summer? The fuck you need a space heater if there are mosquitoes out?
> You got a pretty face. Nice legs too, even if this one is a bit weak
And the legs are thinner than Eugenia Cooney's. What a little beach siren.
> I'm sure you'll love my bathing suit then. It might be smaller than Sky's
Nothing says 'True Trans Man' like wearing extra small bikinis when you are 16-years-old in order to tempt your perverted uncle (and father!) into tag-teaming you. Just FTM Things.
> Gio removes his hand, watching Amaranthine step out
> Tio Gio was Gay
He has a child and he is fingering someone he knows has a vagina. That's not gay, you shotacon retard - that's a pussyhound.
> I'm not that great of a swimmer
> Wears an ultra-small bikini anyways so he can get wet in other ways
Logic.
Very masc, calling your son 'baby'. And why do you need a space heater in summer, again?
> Tankini top with swim shorts. It almost makes him laugh; not at her, but at the difference. He was a boy, wearing the skimpiest bikini he could find
Mm yes, because boys would wear swim trunks and have no issue showing off their chest. You, on the other hand, are wearing a bikini meant more for party-hard college girls vs high school sophomore.
> His tits were so small he could be flat chested
Says a lot that you don't go around topless. You say you're a boy, yet you're leveraging your sexuality in female-typical ways to get MALE attention. This is another case of slapping the trans tag on something that legit doesn't need it.
> You look great
Yes, if Kate Moss leaned even heavier into her peak meth days.
> Forgetting that Viktor was wearing practically nothing
There's nothing there to show. You're flat-chested with a bum leg. A literal wasted pork chop.
> His heart begins to pound as he gets reminded of how big his dad's hands are. He loves that his fingers overlap no matter what part of his body he holds
He's just uwu so smol.
> Fingers rubbing between his small tits like he was scared to touch them
> Feels fingers rub against his cunt, and he jumps slightly
Sounds like he isn't scared at all. There's nothing like rubbing the breasts of your flat-chested 16-year-old child, eh?
> Sometimes Jayce's knuckle would brush against his lip
She's not talking about his mouth, btw.
> This was exactly what he suspected would happen and he was loving every second
You know this is peak Hispanic culture because they legit do think fucking their daughters/nieces/any younger female family member is a way of showing them, 'only I can fuck you this good'. They'll tell you whites are inbred and then you see this.
> Didn't want his brother to say anything vile to his son, or if he just wanted him to himself
Relax, gentlemen. Gay Tio is happy to use that bonus hole, and his father is content on keeping the cycle going.
> I think I'd love it more if there was a hole in your bottoms so I could shove a finger up there
> You don't need a hole, I'm sure you could just push it to the side
Half-Mexican Viktor being a THOT I see.
Here I thought he was shoving Viktor under to try and drown him for letting 'Gay Tio' talk filth to him. That roughhousing didn't seem playful.
> Gripping his waist tighter before kissing his head
But did his thumbs meet in the middle?
Tio is gay, but he has a daugher, meaning he was fine having penis-in-vagina sex to get her. He is also fine fingering his own trans nephew who has an 'AFAB rapehole', so that's another notch off the Gay Uncle hypothesis. Gay men are into dick, not vagina, even the pederast ones.
> It looks like he was staring at his boobs
You're an A-cup. There's nothing to ogle at. There are eggs that get poofier than your breasts.
> His dad is naked
> His eyes widen when he sees his cock hanging between his legs
> It looked long, long like in the porn videos he watched
> He feels himself get hot as he thinks of getting fucked with that thing
You, too, can write transgender incest provided you make the father hot with a big dick. Then everyone will pull the 'God I wish that were me' meme and masturbate in the comments.
> Trying not to imagine himself getting bent over this counter and pounded into by his dad
Gotta keep that pussy in the familia.
> He wishes he would just love him back in that way
You can't make jokes about whites being inbred, not when these are all a flavour of Hispanic engaging in some family lovin'.
> He didn't want to do why she wanted to do
*What she wanted to do
> It's here that Viktor can smell the alcohol
> He doesn't want him. Not like Gio does
Don't worry, there is no 'gay' rape here. It's 100% consensual, even if Viktor here wants to fuck his daddy more than his uncle.
> God, you're such a pretty little thing
> He instantly gropes Viktor's small tits, fitting perfectly in the palm of his hand
Giopara has larger hands than Talis. When you write that Viktor is flat-chested, you need to stick with it. There is no way there is enough breast tissue for him to grope. I can't imagine why a shotacon would be inconsistent with underdeveloped breast sizes.
> He begins rubbing at it and Viktor immediately feels overwhelmed
> This wasn't right. Maybe he wasn't ready for this. Or maybe he knew he didn't want his first time to be with his Tio
And here I thought Tio was 'gay'. What, you have an issue fucking a gay man? A gay man who likes pussy? You'd rather have your porn star father? OK.
> You're gonna leave *your Tio hard and horny
You can identify as a man all you like, but when an actual male wants his dick sucked, you listen.
> If this were anyone else, he would've said yes. He would've tried to push him off and leave him be...unfortunately, he was horny as fuck right now
He went from not wanting his gay uncle to be his 'first', now he's riding his clothed cock. Also notice how Giopara's bulge isn't described in detail. Can't have the BWC earn its title, can we?
> quite
*Quiet. Yes, they are doing this a room away from his own daughter. Just Shotacon things.
Yes, he's grossed out by the fact he felt 'used', not the fact that it's his own fucking uncle that used him as a sex toy. You see, he doesn't like the fact that he reminds Giopara of his 'ex-husband', who also had a vagina and is likely the birthing person behind Amaranthine (whose race, curiously, is not mentioned, though she is frequently drawn and headcanoned as black). He feels 'gross and used' and cries into a plushie (very masc) and listens to none other than Trans Mother Ethel Cain, whose constant disparaging of niggerdom hasn't turned off fellow troons n poons. Don't worry, Big Daddy is here to save the day.
> That's how life works mijo
Does the author know 'sobrino' is the word for nephew? 'Mijo' means 'son'. Does Ximena know her son wants to engage in gender affirming, 13-inch pound town sex with said sobrino?
> Ricky Martin
That's old even for Millennials. I assume this is meant to show that Tio Gio is 100% gay?
> Vanilla? That's a bit basic
> What's wrong with basic?
Calling vanilla 'basic', when you're about to having penis-in-vagina sex with a 16-year-old is pretty 'basic', homie.
> Licks his ice cream, slowly and sensually
"See, dad? I can suck your cock as good as I do this ice cream cone."
> Viktor doesn't pay attention to her at all
Because she's an old hag and will do nothing but nag. Fuck her and those cis bitches.
> He notices again just how big his hands are, how thick his fingers are. Fuck, he wants them inside of him so bad
Look at those yaoi hands. He could fight the Locust Horde from Gears of War bare-handed.
> He can feel his face heating up as he imagined his dad pumping his fingers in and out, stretching him out before putting that monster of a cock inside him
"We keep these 13 inches inside our borders, sobrino."
> He can feel his cunt fluttering
But is it fluttering shyly?
> His pussy makes a squelching noise with every thrust
I guarantee it's going to be doing a lot of that in the next ten minutes.
> Viktor realizes how scorching hot his pussy yes
Vaginas are hot: news at 11. Now watch this Mexican mutt keep it in the family with theirs.
He admits that he has romantic and sexual feelings for his own father for the past year - meaning he likely had these as soon as he hit puberty - and wants him to be 'more than a dad'. There's nothing like proving that Hispanics really do fuck their own daughters as a means of 'daddy comes first'. Did white hands type this? Who knows.
> Call him gross and sick and perverted
Your father and uncle would be put on a Sex Offender registry but since they are hot with large penises they are exempt. We celebrate all forms of family love here.
> Me putting on that sunscreen didn't tell you?
Yeah, who could forget that fatherly fingering action? Everyone does that.
Nothing like having your vulva admired by your own dad in a tent, eh?
> You're pretty tight
For once, there's no blood. He's magically wet enough to take that MS13 inches.
> Daddy - I want - want your cock. Cock. Please I want you to fuck me
Sex talk if narrated by Simple Jack
> You're a virgin aren't you?
See? Hispanic fathers enjoy being the 'first' in their daughters/nieces sexual lives. Thank you dear author for getting this one precious aspect of Hispanic culture right.
> I'm probably stretching you out, huh? Never taken something as big as me before
Me when I shove my comforter in the washing machine
> Bottoming out and pressing against Viktor's cervix
The cervix can go back 8 inches if aroused. Some women can go back even further. However, I don't need to read about a 16-year-old's cervix getting tapped by their father's penis. Reminder: this author has written about eight-year-olds having sex, so this is a 'blessing'.
> Viktor's cunt tightens and flutters
Oop, it's fluttering again.
> His eyes cross
Look at that, we've got Hispanic incest and the retard hentai look. This girl's got everything!
And that's that. Here I thought it would be even more graphic since this shotacon writes about eight-year-olds, but you gotta take the wins when you can. It still doesn't erase the fact that they're a pedophile and undeserving of human rights. I still have that one fic where 15-year-old Viktor's anus went 'bloodless' from fisting burned into my mind. You don't want that.
> Most in fact
This doesn't read right to me. 'Matter-of-fact' would work much better.
> Jayce had his morality above many things, including his own well-being
This guy ordered a blockade and was in control of the police force. What are you talking about, lmao
> In the end, someone conspicuously close to his animosity
*Someone close who held animosity towards him
> ...bringing back a lot from his past, where he had been nearly expelled from the Academy
Everyone knows that, though. He blew up his apartment building because he was hoarding illegal Shuriman crystals. He got a 'pardon' because he managed to show the tech could be used for good. You're going to have to use better dirt in order to tarnish his name.
> Then, once again, Viktor felt guilty about how he took it
You became a trans man, and you still have to perform ALL the emotional labour. Sucks to be you.
> He remembers that time as well, how delicate his mental health was
A pooner with mental health conditions? You don't say. A trans man who's afraid of needles and has to have a man inject his testosterone shots for him? You also don't say.
> Oh mine
*Oh my (?)
> There was trash closed in bags that had not been taken outside, plates piling up, clothes in the living room, empty soda cans, and water bottles everywhere
He's a real Howard Hughes, sans the milk bottles being filled with piss. You also have to admire how the AFAB is expected to clean this up.
> Jayce was irreducible in helping him with his shot first, to which Viktor accepted, more for Jayce's sake than himself
...did you not just admit that you were afraid of needles? 'Irreducible' is also the wrong adjective here. It means something that cannot be reduced or restored to its original state. 'Irreplaceable' might be a better alternative.
> He was the voice of many people, and he felt like he was failing all of them
> Instituted martial law
> Sends militarized cops to harass Viktor's people
> Created weapons to stop a terrorist
> Waaah I am depressed
Astounding 180 in character right there.
> I've never wanted Hextech to help cure my illness at the expense of your health
This is a lie. He worked on the Hexcore in secret so he COULD cure himself, once he discovered it could work on biological material. He did, in fact, want to live at one point.
> I don't know how to handle those people, they have been doing this for decades, and I'm so clumsy around them
He's a 32-year-old man by now. He instituted a blockade and ordered martial law. He knows what he's doing. He was given that position to protect Hextech from being stolen or misused by anyone else; the idea that he really hates it, was unsuited for it or forced into it was a product of S2's bad writing (and Mel bias, even if she isn't here).
> He would often compare himself to people who were in more advanced levels of skill than his own
He doesn't do this, lmao. Jayce (both versions) KNOW they're good. Talis is a little more subtle with his cockiness but it's there; in his own journal he calls Dmitri a retarded loser who doesn't belong in the Academy. This man is THE definition of a petty gossip.
> That someone wrote it and that most of it's simply not true
Did they bring receipts? Because Viktor more or less is Jayce's 'dirty little secret', because people don't want to admit that a Zaunite helped create Hextech. His name wasn't even on the Hexgates, remember.
> I hate to remember I didn't stand by you in your trial. I was afraid to lose my job
No, he wasn't. He only gained access to Jayce's work BEFORE it was destroyed. Then he realized Jayce's potential. We're making Viktor the martyr he never was, lol
> They never spoke of that time. When Viktor interrupted him
Great, here we go with queercatfan sentence structure. I thought this would've been retired.
> Someone he wanted permission to love openly
Is it because he's trans or because he's an Undercity dog?
> You know where. You were just passing by. I haven't seen you there in months
The location in question:
> Quit the council, end Hextech, live off your savings, and later just teach at the academy. Just don't leave me
Yes, asking the terminally depressed man to abandon his one dream and raison d'etre is a surefire way to stop him from ending his life.
> He felt safe nonetheless
It's always about safety with these people.
> Says he is his best friend and whole life
> Asks the trans man to do the dishes
I had a good chuckle at that. AFABs and dishwashers, name a better duo.
> His room was filled with used tissues
> They're cum tissues
> He masturbated furiously in order to get a dopamine hit
> Experienced post-nut clarity and increased depression after these sessions
> Doesn't think post-nut clarity and depressive addictions exist
Someone needs to check up on their reading. A LOT of men become porn addicts when depressed and it only makes it worse.
>This was not something he could change about how his brain functioned, no matter how he tried to avoid it
You can, actually. You need to 'reset' your brain. Abstain from masturbation and go outside. Watch the birds. Follow the bugs in the grass. Stop filling tissues with your dirty cum. You'll feel better.
> Viktor's facial hair was not as dense as his
The trans man has pube hair on his face? No way!
> All he wanted was a chance by now, anything would suffice
Semicolons are your friend.
> It had been rather intimate; Jayce gave him some looks too, he was very intense with his eyes
I couldn't tell.
> Jayce noticed he had also taken the dust out of his table, and the trash bags were gone
I like how the disabled pooner had to clean out his entire apartment and didn't break a sweat. The able-bodied cis man? Living like an incel chud. Nothing ever happens.
> Of course. So he would not manipulate the razor alone. So he could throw it away. So it would not be at sight
Is he trying to commit suicide with a razor? I'm about to off myself reading this fucking sentence. Let's try this again: "He had finally realized why Viktor had helped him shave: so he would not manipulate the razor alone; so it would be out of sight, and later thrown away."
*It took Jayce a moment to acknowledge Viktor's comment for what it was: flirting. He was flirting with him - and he liked it.
You can't convince me there's any chemistry between them because there's no passion and intimacy between them at all. That razor blade has a better relationship with Jayce's skin.
> About his opinion on general things
They've been friends for many years at this point. They probably know what wax Jayce uses on his asshole.
*I hoped...I was afraid you wouldn't have felt the same for me
There.
The smut scene is in a much smaller chapter. It will be included in the next spoiler.
> Jayce was scared, for lack of a better word, to spoil everything since he had been emotionally unstable
I suppose the author deserves some kudos for SOME self-awareness.
> Viktor would keep to himself on the following day or two from his shot
> Jayce doesn't understand why Viktor takes these days off
> Assumes it has to do with body dysphoria
You have to appreciate how these authors will shove transness everywhere and then will make the 'cis' man utterly confused on what testosterone actually does. Viktor takes those days off because ye - I shit you not - masturbates at work. This is the only thing that brings him closer to natal males.
See? Viktor, after taking those testosterone shots, masturbates furiously over the toilet - and not a drop of that slick is getting dried up. They're wet and ready to go, 24/7.
> He was afraid of triggering him
Even in their fantasies, you have to walk on eggshells to avoid upsetting trans people.
> Hun this...this is very common after taking the shot
I read this dialogue and it immediately struck me that this is the author talking, not the character. Viktor doesn't talk like this. This is just the author self-projecting, as these women are wont to do.
> Fuck, he was turned on
> This made Viktor unbelievably horny
I don't think you are, mate.
> He dared to touch him under his shirt rather soon
ESL author? The Engrish is off-putting.
> Help him with much ease to go up and down on his clothed cock. That friction was divine
This writing sure isn't. "He helped him move up and down on his clothed cock with ease" is how this should've gone.
> Now thinking, while using his hazy mind, Viktor realized they might have frotted while making out
You need two dicks for that, and yours is small enough to get jammed in that zipper.
> What a nice guy this one was
I love how this is supposed to be said positively, but instead comes off as sarcastic. He sounds like me frfr.
> Only to command him to fuck the O-shaped opening he made with his grip
Just write 'fuck his hand'. People know it's not literal.
*I haven't been completely honest with you, Jayce. I'm sorry.
> I kept you waiting because of birth control
Oh wow, an author admits that testosterone is NOT valid birth control and that pregnancy would put his disabled body under a lot of stress? That's a first.
> Jayce finally got a little taste of Viktor, and fuck, he was hard
...which one?
> He played with his T dick over his underwear
And it's still smaller than the length of his zipper, lmao
> His underwear was completely wet, his hard cock was peaking through the fabrics
'Peaking', eh?
> Hyperventilating with the idea of having a second time with him in his house
* He hyperventilates. It probably isn't safe to hyperventilate during sex anyways, but what do I know?
> And soon he held Viktor's head on the back
*He held the back of his head
> He at him up good, he fingered him, and gave him marks on his hipbones
Written with the enthusiasm as eating a KFC meal bucket.
> Flicked his clit
I thought it was a cock?
> His partner meant every fucking suck and motion
This is a real line.
> Knew when because he would become more floppy and more lewd in how he would do it
??? The fuck does this mean.
> Do you have breath for more? If you do?
Yeah this is an ESL. 'Do you have ENERGY for more' is what you would ask.
> Viktor moaned while he saw Jayce sucking his t-dick just right
Is it becoming more floppy and lewd when he does it? If you do?
> Tho
This is a fanfic, not Black Twitter. Speak proper English. Chinese fanfic writers with bad English can write Shakespearean poetry. What is your excuse?
> He went back to fucking him, grabbing him strongly by the waist
But is his waist so small his thumbs meet in the middle?
> His body was perfect: he was strong, firm, but also gentle in good measure
You would have never thought he was terminally depressed based on how he was fucking. Leave it to pussy to cure a male of his depression.
> His hand rubbing his wet clit
I thought it was a cock?
> His cunt never seemed so fucking ready to receive Jayce's cum
This is a real line.
> He came strongly
> Fuck, I'm coming
Aren't you already coming?
> Viktor was mostly a pervert for taking a paid Jerk Off day from work when he took his shots
Well, damn. Other men should get days off work when they take TRT. 'Sorry boss, I had a bout of depression. Had to jack off while watching "Better Call Saul" so I wouldn't walk around with a boner at work. Gustavo Fring has that affect on me, y'know?'
You would have never thought this was about depression if you just skipped to Chapter 2. All the guy needed was T-addled pussy and he's back to normal. Male loneliness epidemic? Pshaw. Get yourself a pooner and they'll do everything - dishwashing, dick sucking, dry cleaning - in the name of male solidarity. You'll never blackpill again.
bruhthatsgay has embarked on a new series, but before I am tempted to read that one, I wanted to take a peek at one where there are actually adults in the room, vs a groomed teenager being enthralled by their predatory teacher.
> One reason only: get a few drinks, relax, and (G)od willing, get laid
Those are three reasons.
> Pinned between two hunks on the dance floor and drinking shots from their hands like there's no tomorrow
Uh oh. Hubby ain't keeping our pet pooner pleased, so they're out on the dance floor getting another version of 'Heat'. Keep pressing his button and you'll get the Bank of America bonus.
> Single as a Pringle and ready to mingle
Haven't heard that idiom before. Interesting.
> His married thirty-five-year-old neighbour
> He's a house husband
> Pre op
> He doesn't want to be a homemaker but is made that way because his 'gay' husband wants children
> His rejecting a fellow white man's semen and he is wanted/valued at his ability to birth children
Every time.
> He is pre op
So he's just fucking a woman; a woman with 'perky, cute tits' in an American Beauty robe. Just like nakura, these breasts also change size as we go along.
> Grind on a hot blonde
*Blond. Don't disrespect Fabio like that.
> He watches Viktor dance in nothing but a crop top and a pair of denim shorts
Yes, he's dressing like a scene THOT with no underwear beneath those shorts. He's making the floor sticky.
> His hair freshly cut and highlighted underneath, sharp eyeliner and - good god is that a hickey?
They say people get makeovers when they're about to score big in life. I assume Viktor is getting a divorce and half of his husband's earnings? It wouldn't be considered masc if you signed a prenup.
> He's a cheating bastard
So are you, lmao. It's OK though because you have a pussy pass.
> Then he wraps a hand around Viktor's tiny waist
He wrapped his big yaoi hand around that tiny waist? Just the one?
> Slipping them under his ass
What ass?
> Viktor's legs wrap around his waist and his arms around Jayce's neck, his cane tapping against Jayce's ass as he carries him to the back of the club
I assume this is one of those clubs where people are allowed to fuck in dark corners, otherwise you would be kicked out. Must be one of the 'trans friendly' ones where gay (bi) men seek out easy pussy.
> In the bathroom? Really?
Having sex in the bathroom is the most male-typical thing you can do.
> Biting his lip as his pussy juice drips down his wrist, his cunt squelching loudly
Nice. It'll match the piss stains and drugs stained on the toilet. It'll be it's own brand of air freshener.
> Feel his cunt flutter
Would you look at that, it's ~fluttering~
> He kisses Viktor again and they quietly slip out of the bathroom stall
He didn't bother to wash his hands. His hands, coated in pooner pussy juice, touched that phone, and then likely touched the door handles of that unsuspecting Uber driver. His entire vehicle is going to have to be decontaminated.
> Find Viktor's narrow waist and he squeezes him
But was it so small his thumbs met in the middle?
> Then to his beautiful little breasts. Jayce takes one in each hand, perfect little handfuls, and he squeezes both
Jayce's hands are so big they are able to encircle his waist with just one paw. Viktor's breasts were described as 'perky and cute'; they are clearly bigger than a B cup if they are being fondled like that.
> He circles his cock twice before he wraps his lips around him and sucks
> His clit
Pick one.
> Pulling his fingers out to lap at Viktor's hole and swallow down his spend
So can you taste the shots down there or no?
> You're as big as I imagined
Of course. That's how he got a 16-year-old pregnant and managed to escape a Sex Offender charge by sending some sexy selfies. Pretty Privilege always comes in clutch.
> He'd be lying to everyone, including himself, if he he dared to say he didn't think of it, never imagined it, especially after the driveway
White pussy be hittin' DIFFERENT. Especially on Juneteenth!
> He's leaning over Viktor on the bed he shared with his fucking husband and Viktor is telling him to fuck him raw
He wants that semen SEASONED. He's well-endowed, a real cervical smasher, and he's folding that disabled boi in half like he never had spinal problems to begin with.
> Has the best sex of his married life to a Mexican man
> Has a bigger dick than his husband, is more muscular and powerful and more handsome
> Breaks down crying because he 'never knew' that sex could feel so good
White people don't season they dicks, and FTMs are always breaking down crying afterwards. Sorry, you just got your back blown out a different way and you're crying? What a loser. They can't even win in their own sexual fantasies.
multi_yohanna has come out with the third chapter of her 50 First Anxious Dates fic. After bungling the first date with a man who did nothing wrong (#JusticeforMark), we now have trigger warnings for child abuse and someone's mother dying of brain cancer. Walking on eggshells is 100% a True and Honest Male trait.
> Now, with his unwavering attention planted firmly on Viktor...he feels like prey caught in a snare. Jayce is the hunter, knowing he has all the time in the world because Viktor isn't going anywhere
Of course the trans man with trauma around touch and has anxious attacks if someone so much as sneezes on him is the uwu prey, the wee rabbit stuck in a snare while Jayce, the big, bad, bedicked Mexican hunter is there to skin him alive.
> Yes, he ordered a bright pink mocktail
Because pink is a GIRLY colour, right? It has nothing to do with the fruit they put in the drink! #PointlesslyGendered
> He feels so stupid. So inadequate
The author isn't kidding about that. The more I read, the more I understand that her version of Viktor is a complete nervous wreck: he constantly compares himself to 'cis' people, he has anxiety attacks on the regular, he's suspicious of others and has no real personality aside from being a shy, shaking animal because while he might identify as a man, he cannot shed that female socialization. It only gets more apparent as this continues.
> They're softer now, the predatory gleam gone
I always love the fact that it's disabled white women who will just come out and say Mexican men are predators. Just embrace the racism, Wheelchair Wendy.
> Your accent gets thicker the faster you talk...it's sexy
So he turns into Zelenskyy when he gets excited. Good to know.
> This is okay. This he knows
He literally has to get in a safe space to talk about his major. Trigger warning for paralysis!
> My dad died during a surgery like that
Yes, this is what we needed a 'content warning' for: someone dying of a tragic accident. These are facts of life; it's not like you're writing the Siege of Manila. Grow a pair since you want them so bad.
> I feel like - I don't know, like I'm bringing the mood down?
The more you talk? Like this? Showcases that female socialization. Why did you transition if you were still going to sound like you're a breath away from a full nervous breakdown?
>I think it only feels easy because it's you. I feel comfortable with you
That 18 inch cock sure helps.
> I feel like my research is all that's remotely interesting about me
And you would be correct. Narratively, you're a full on energy vampire. If this were an OC I'd hate them off the bat.
> If you're not comparable, it's not the end of the world. Don't ever pretend to be something you're not
Says the fucking TRANS MAN, WHO IS PRETENDING TO BE SOMETHING HE'S NOT. Of course you will NEVER see men ask why the fuck a 'pussy haver' is trying to hit them up or why they're engaging in rape by deception. That's transphobic and we don't tolerate that here!
> Gasps, then giggles
You're so feminine even the most feminine of faggots are cringing at you.
> When Viktor has only met people who made him feel safe half a handful of times
So why did you transition? You wanted to be a man for security's sake, yet don't possess an iota of confidence. Why are you, a trans man, so concerned with feeling 'safe'? Shouldn't you MAKE things safer for yourself, because that's what men do?
> Viktor truly has o idea why Jayce seems to despise Mark so much
He's mad a Viltrumite is trespassing on his property.
> He tried to touch your hand after you talked for a bit, right? We can assume it will happen again
Why is a touch-averse tranny going on dates, then?
> The issue is that Viktor isn't sure he would have welcomed his touch ever
See point above.
> So, if I'm the guy sitting here, interested in you, and you tell me that, I would ask why. Because I would ask, just to get a general idea of what not to do
Yeah, there's a big problem with that line of thinking: some men will NOT take it well, and will wonder just as I have: why are you, a touch-averse tranny, going to bars and flirting with men in an effort to get dates and, potentially, sex? They would just tell you that you're wasting their time, and they're here for a fun time, not a therapy session. I guarantee you most men would just, "I don't care, dude" when he starts talking about how he was beat as a kid.
> His first instinct is to run away and change the subject
The universal rule of troons and poons reigns supreme: pooners will seek the nearest bathroom to cry in, troons will dropkick a bookshelf and threaten to kill someone.
I am also not surprise Viktor's fear of touch was due to childhood abuse. Did this cause his poonerisms, too, or is that totally unrelated?
> It's a trauma response, and I'm trying to get better at it
You aren't, though.
> It's just this - this discomfort. Anxiety That my body isn't really my own
And why did you transition if you are STILL uncomfortable with your body? Why do you NEED to be reminded that you're safe?
> Thank you for telling me this. Thank you for trusting me
A guy on the first date would more or less say they aren't his therapist. "I don't care, dude."
Just say, in a deep, manly voice, you're not a fan of physical touch. When pressed, just say, 'stuff from my childhood' or 'personal problems'. That's it. You don't need to trauma dump, and this is something I noticed happened in the first fic, too. All yohanna does is trauma dump.
> Agrees to go for a dance even when he doesn't want to
> Immediately gets jealous and insecure of able-bodied people
He did that with the 'cis' women who were just posting for an Instagram photo. He lost his mind because he thought they made him feel inadequate.
> I don't want to disappoint you and I'm supposed to be uncomfortable
There's that female socialization again. Men don't normally care about being 'uncomfortable'. You're triggered over people DANCING. What the fuck is that testosterone doing? Making your tear ducts work in overdrive?
> You know where that line is, V. You felt it as soon as I suggested something that crosses it, right?
Apparently the line is at microscopic level, because there is nothing in the world that this pooner ISN'T afraid of. He's talking about boundaries and self-respect as if he's a battered woman, not someone who claims they're 'one of the guys'.
> He's never felt this kind of fire, low but powerful in the way it slowly spreads and makes his body tremble
Can't handle a date or physical touch, but loves the idea of fucking a sexy Mexican. Makes sense.
> And you're always pretty, don't get me wrong -
He's not peak Winona Ryder. He's a skinnier, skimpier Tommy Wiseau. This is who you're calling pretty.
> The mention of the other guy momentarily makes Viktor dizzy
It's so masc getting wet at the idea that two men would fight over you.
> I'm stating an opinion. Objective facts.
> You do know that you're opinion can't be objective? That is an oxymoron
Unironically the sole piece of smart dialogue I've seen. I'd buy this more if they spoke like that.
> He seems to want a lot, he can't seem to stop moving his legs and tracing Viktor's fingers
Very masc, playing Footloose at the bar.
> Watermelon and elderflower
Sounds pretty good. Get ready for a mini-lecture on how pink fruit isn't masc to eat and how he's afraid of being seen as a woman.
> Just like that, he's back in the trenches, fighting a battle he was never equipped to win
This creature would lose if a newspaper flew in his face. I'd probably feel worse for the tank that had to run him over.
> The reputation these drinks have
Newsflash, my dear progshit: pink fruity drinks can absolutely be drunk by men. Cocktailsa are cocktails; what people appreciate is the fresh fruit and flavour. One appreciates how the pooner who can't talk like a man, think like a man and has mental breakdowns over the thought of dancing near cis people is worried about being made fun of by other men for drinking a pink alcoholic beverage. One of my favourite alcoholic beverages was dark pink, with passionfruit. Guess that makes me an uwu Princess Barbie. You want 'manlier' drinks, go to a biker bar. You're in a fucking 'gay' bar, you dumb fuck. NO ONE GIVES A SHIT ABOUT THE COLOUR OF THE DRINK, THEY WANT TO HAVE FUN.
> I feel like I'll disappoint everyone, no matter how much I practice
Bitch who caaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrresssssssss man the fuck up.
> Well, that's a bit sad, really
I'll say.
> Do you think this helped?
> It's still early, but I think so?
I cannot fucking standing these people, my God I'm about to dig up some radium and eat it.
> If this is what dating is like - if he'll be this relaxed and feel this safe
This makes it seem he endured what most women endure during dates: the expectations of sex after the man bought their meal. You'd think with transitioning none of this would matter to our lil dood, but it clearly does and he's more concerned about feeling safe (emotionally), rather than worry if the man will beat him for finding out he has a vagina.
> The little nagging voice in the back of his mind that grows louder by the second, whispering that he's barreling head-first into disaster and heartbreak
Listen to that little voice. You're pathetic and should probably 41%.
> Viktor has never known touch like that; that it could be supportive instead of harmful
This is supposed to be 'fun' and 'sexy'? Why does it read like a long-winded therapy session?
> To see that a date should be fun, even if it's scary
You're acting like he's dating John Wayne Gacy.
> It's an insane motion, one that Viktor would have laughed at a few hours
I am waiting for the 'sexy' parts because dear God I cannot stand these people.
> What if Jayce hates it? What should Viktor do?
Cry over Instagram?
> Still with me
Not really. The kiss is by far the most interesting part of the chapter, even if these two don't click as they usually do.
> He can't get them to stop shaking
That's implying they ever stop shaking. This man would lose against tissue paper.
> Viktor complies - not because he doesn't want to, but because he does
So he wanted to.
> He's never touched another person like this
We know. You just had a whole therapist session where you went into how kids beat you for being disabled.
> His hands, bony and so very pale
Awww they're mini cigarettes.
> He hopes he isn't disappointing Jayce. That he isn't - disgusted by him
I am just by virtue of you being so pathetic you need to feel 'safe' just to go on dates. You could always try FetLife or VRChat. Hell, Roblox has adult servers. You try OOFing your way through a date?
> Just like their breathing; like their eyes, which lock together, like their noses, which touch from time to time
There. Semicolons are your friend.
> He's not sure he is capable of more than that. Or that he ever will be, after this
He just keeps taking L after L. A man's kiss is your raison d'etre? That your entire existence centers on a man loving you? Same people say female characters are weak and selfish for having traits like these, btw.
> Might have wrangled his emotions into an orderly pile he could've shoved under a dusty shelf
> Gets kissed by a man
> Immediately gets the confidence they lacked before
What dat mean
I hope you are ready for more trauma dumps before our brave lil dood here gets his cum dumps.
We start with a Lady Masemar/Shoola letter: the social season is just a few weeks away, and everyone is so enthralled with Viktor's charm and beauty. They are hosting their first ball, and everyone is waiting to see whether they'll measure up. The odd thing? It's mothers and heads of households that are going to pay the most attention, thereby putting Viktor into this camp. All these twists and turns and all he ended up was a housewife.
In the next scene, Jayce is taking Viktor on a tour of his ancestral home, replete with vaulted ceilings, crystal chandeliers, and mahogany staircases leading to every floor in the house. He remarks that his father once told him that their wealth was 'comparable to a duke', even though the display of this wealth has only been mentioned in several chapters. In the earlier chapters, you got the impression his huge house was a bit run-down as no one was staying behind to maintain it. Now it's full of servants and clean? OK. Anyways, they unveiled their bedroom and everyone knows they have 'done their duty', leaving Viktor alone as Jayce goes off to the House of Lords, enjoying his innate privilege. Oh, that reminds me: it's clear Piltover is based on Westminster, but what about Zaun? There are no hereditary rights there as you can simply declare yourself King. All that work to establish their politics and you leave it at this?
Jayce then takes him to the garden, something he's eager to show. Like the rest of his property, it's huge and well-maintained, with plenty of rose bushes and perfectly trimmed hedges that compliment the benches and pergolas. Turns out, he plucked all the flowers he gave to Viktor from his very own garden, not trusting florists with his frequent requests for romantic flowers. His other investors are still asking him about the platinum he ordered, wondering why he needs it - and to be fair, this fic completely dropped the invention arc right from Chapter 3 - before Viktor states he can still ask a resentful Silco for platinum and opal. It looks like we're trying to salvage it, as Jayce says he cannot ask Silco for it as those materials belong to the Zaunites and he has to build up their trust again for stealing away their monarch-to-be. During the ball, Jayce plans to introduce Viktor as his partner, and that when they talk to him, they'll forget everything else. Jayce promises to give them invites to the ball.
As it turns out, our gender-breaking trans man is so autistic (and a little bit daft) not to know the difference between metal and silver spoons and that all spoons are the same size and serve the same purpose. He learned about etiquette and proper bedroom maintenance from Silco, but never learned what a fucking teaspoon was? 200 IQ right there. He does, however, know the difference between nickel, chromium, and molybdenum. The author clearly did some research on the last element, as it does have industrial uses, but here's the problem: the era this is set in is the 1800s. Molybdenum didn't find industrial use until 1903, where it was used in high-temp furnaces. In WW1, it was in demand for tank plating. She's off by 100 years; she can't decide whether this is a Steampunk Bridgerton or not. I am no industrial engineer, but I do know some things about rocks, and she's wrong on all of them.
During their little chit-chat, one of Jayce's servants, Jonathan, tells him his horse is ready. The reason? He needs it to head to one of the brothels Salo is staying at, removing the final obstacle from this HEA ending. Viktor, thinking it's a meeting, tells him he will see him at dinner, but you can tell from his posture he knows something is up. Not that that matters; in the next scene he is looking over receipts and orders for the blacksmith's shop, saying they need to be paid by Friday. He asks if there is anything else he is missing, and Sky - white Sky, mind you - tells him he needs to look over the menus for the ball. He snaps his fingers and Ximena is there to help; no longer just an abuela who manages the house, she's also the abuela who manages the house but with a white master. Sky, also his 'servant', tells her to bring him the chef's suggestions. She leaves, and Ximena compliments him for adapting to his role so quick. Turns out, he learned accounting along with his 'wifely' duties, even though he liked physics and science more.
Ximena, who is embroidering, notices Viktor's crestfallen expression, and goes to comfort him. He says that thinking of the past gives him dizziness (I'll say it right now, I bet you he's actually pregnant), as does thinking of his siblings. Ximena comforts him with the usual placards: she missed her family once, too, but told herself she'd 'see them again soon'; her husband trusted her, etc etc. She heaps praise on her husband, noting that he was more than overjoyed to take his son into the forge. While society looks down upon nobles who get their hands dirty, Jayce wanted to experience what the working class experience to empathize more with his workers. Ximena notes that he is stubborn, and Viktor agrees; while working on their prototype - which now, on the second-to-last chapter, makes an appearance - for days on end, refusing to come out. He's busy working on their theories about platinum, none of which involve platinum as a catalyst or use in fuel cells. Wikipedia is right there, lass.
Ximena tells Viktor that if he needs help with the ball, she'll be there every step of the way. Just when he's about to ask if sending invitations three weeks out is bad form, Jayce (written as 'Jaye') appears, earning a smile from Ximena. She jokes that if he ever mad Viktor mad, she'd smack him on the head in his stead - sans flipflops. Jayce then jokes in turn that Ximena already loves Viktor more than him, before Viktor flatly tells him he was asking for help about the ball. Jayce facepalms, forgetting the whole thing in the wake of tax logs and House of Lords duties. They haven't even thought of a theme yet!
But that isn't the problem: Viktor knows Jayce is hiding something. At first, they were all cuddly and snuggly in bed, and now Jayce leaves at odd times in the night, leaving Viktor to wake up alone. When he suggests his theme was hosting the ball in the garden, Jayce agrees, though you can tell he is distracted. Sky and Ximena approved of the decision, saying it was a great idea - all in Viktor's dry tone that Jayce notices. Jayce tries to change the subject by offering to take him to their family's social club so they can meet other people. He is shot down with the invitation Baron Stone gave Viktor, who informs Jayce he was already invited to tea with Jhin. He says he will see him at dinner (again), and they kiss. The kiss isn't the same as their usual kisses: he gets a weird tingling sensation, almost like The Ick, and notes that Jayce had always been attentive to him and never gave him that feeling at all. When he asks if everything is alright, Jayce simply says, 'Of course'.
We then cut to Viktor's meeting at the Adamant Club, located in the city's center. It's well-furnished with good acoustics; when Viktor first arrives, he can hear some people chatting, but it isn't loud enough to give him anxiety. He's 15 minutes early because he needed to get away from Jayce's 'weird' attitude, and we are then introduced to Jhin. He is described as an 'elegant man with chestnut hair slicked back and large brown eyes.' Meanwhile, here is concept art of him maskless:
That doesn't look like chestnut hair to me.
They exchange formalities, and Viktor is presented lunch: perfectly cut square sandwiches, sans crusts, and perfectly cut cucumbers. They talk about Viktor being the Diamond of the Season; how his tale of giving up his crown for love was 'straight out of a fairytale'; how it 'happened so fast' Viktor can't believe it himself when it comes out of people's mouths. Jhin says he 'can't fully understand it', as he was just the 'son of a sir' who climbed the social ladder. A real Petyr Baelish, if you will. Everyone gossips in this society, he says; if you don't hear it, your housekeeper will, or you can stir up drama yourself.
As it happens, Jhin is also going to be the new Diamond of the Season, and Viktor hopes his time being the Diamond won't be as bad as his. He says he was lucky his husband's proposal was the first and best one, so he didn't have to crash an entire dynasty and ruin bloodlines like Viktor did. That isn't said at loud, of course, not in Lady Masemar's club. That's right, Ms. Mysterious had an entire club where she stores all her Diamonds, preening them so they can move up the social ladder and gain the eyes and ear of the new King. Everyone here is valuable; when Viktor asks why he got a personal invitation, Jhin tells him Masemar was going to send him one anyways, but Jhin wanted a head start. He would have invied Viktor at his house, but it's too loud and busy (hey, doesn't he have a kid?) and he needs peace and quiet. Viktor agrees; he needs a break for all that ball preparation.
Jhin, sensing Viktor's unease, asks if this is Viktor's first ball he's ever organized. He tells him that during his first ball, he forgot to send out dance cards, and there was 'chaos'. This familiarity - poon on poon, no doubt - makes Viktor take an instant liking to Jhin, thanks to his "Listen and Don't Judge" mantra. Viktor says yes, it is his first, but his mother-in-law is helping. He then asks Jhin if Jhin's husband helps with anything, and he says he does - somewhat. He then offers to give advice if Viktor wants it. Instead, Viktor mulls over Jayce's behaviour over the past few days - the silences between them, the conversations that ended as soon as they started, the distance - has been pushing Viktor away. He's noticed that Jayce is more withdrawn at the country estate than he was among his people, and this in turn leaves Viktor very lonely. Jhin tries to offer an explanation: when he met Jayce several years ago, he wasn't into socializing, so that's why he's acting the way he does. Why, Jayce mentioned music only once, a piano piece to be precise, and does Viktor play the piano? Because Jhin does and he can teach him to play the piano. It's this suggestion that sends a thought screaming through Viktor's head that there's more to Jayce's absence even when he can't put a finger on it.
Pivoting back to the conversation, Viktor says he plays a few pieces, but Jayce is the better player, and he'd love to be taught by him one day. In fact, Jayce was the one who introduced Jhin to his husband after he got bored hearing Jayce talk about physics and science. Viktor then goes to congratulate Jhin on his second set of children: two boys and a husband over the moon. Jhin then gives Viktor a knowing look and says his husband didn't have to give birth to them, and how his labour was long and arduous. Even when trans identity is 100% accepted, trans men still bear the brunt of reproductive expectations. Hate when that happens.
Jhin then gives advice on how to throw balls: if something goes wrong, give the nobles alcohol and lots of it, for they will forget slights the morning after. They talk about weird noble customs, invisible rules that have to be followed, and social expectations. When he talks about falling asleep during Mass, a woman in a blue dress rushes past, clearly upset with a handkerchief to her face. It's Lady Anne with her two handmaidens, crying her eyes out because her husband is having an affair. An affair, when she was a former Diamond! How awful. Jhin continues chatting away, causing Viktor to spiral and wonder if he will one day be at the gossip end of Jhin's mouth. He might not have a fetish for murder in this AU, but he still kills people with words. A real Milo Yiannopoulos.
Back at the house, the mansion is undergoing a full makeover for the ball: columns draped in luminous vines, a spacious dance floor made completely of marble, and hundreds of flower pots. Everything has to be perfect, including the last batch of invitations that he orders Sky to deliver. Even Jhin helped out by choosing the best musicians in the kingdom. What a swell guy, it almost makes Viktor forget that Jayce's absences are dragging on him. When he wakes up, the bed is cold and empty, the sheets left smooth and undisturbed as if no one had slept there. After having four smut scenes - one with a black negligee - they don't even have sex anymore, leaving Viktor the upset, dried up wife desperate to ignite their lost passion (okay I'm hamming it up here, but you know the last chapter will be exactly this). This leads Viktor to think Jayce is cheating on him; he even asks Sky if any other rooms are used in the house. Confused, she says no, and Viktor, sensing she isn't lying, says he trusts her - with the glasses and drinks. She would rather break a thousand vases than see anything go wrong in their relationship. Worse still, these problems would reach Lady Masemar, who probably already got the deets from Jhin. Niggas simply can't mind their own business.
Even Jayce's own mother notices his absences and weird behaviour. When he asks permission to see Jayce - as if he NEEDs permission in this 'everyone is equal' world - he opens his office to find it empty as well. He examines the desk and finds nothing out of the ordinary - it's all diagrams and science-related things, things he knows and understands - and is about to leave until he finds a book out of place on the bookshelf. When he opens it, he finds that the pages have been hollowed out, cut in a way to hide something - and when he find traces of gunpowder on the pages, it all clicks: he's been hiding a gun, even when all his rifles (that he doesn't use) are locked up and accounted for. He wonders what Jayce could possibly be up to, and when he sees Jayce again, he does not wave back at him.
We then cut to Jayce's POV. He hasn't slept, thinking of all the ways he's going to kill Salo. He's been working on a modified gun design where the projectile is altered for maximum penetration and effectiveness; he is, in effect, creating hollow point bullets. All he can think of is the scar on Viktor's side and it fills him with rage (but not the leg snapped in half, curious); for one moment, he understands where Silco is coming from and vows that no one would ever hurt his son again. It isn't just simple revenge, it's just simple revenge.
Jayce cannot find it in himself to confess to Viktor what he's up to, so he's been keeping it all secret, prowling into the night for the brothels not to find pleasure in flesh, but pleasure in hitting someone with a very different phallic-shaped object. Mind you, Jayce has never engaged in gun modification whatsoever in this fic, because he was initially described as someone who COULDN'T shoot a gun. We're just gonna pretend that oopsie doesn't exist and he's modifying heavy weapons like the North Hollywood shooters. After three weeks, the modified gun is complete. Jayce, watching Viktor sleep, says, 'You don't deserve this burden', and kisses him on the forehead before departing.
> He'd considered putting on a cloak - that would make him more inconspicuous - but it would have left him more vulnerable to whatever that scum might do
So it doesn't make you inconspicuous. You're just walking around with fancy clothing that offers no protection.
> You look like you need someone to suck your sorrows away
Sorry, but his vacuum cleaner is at home, tending to parties and embroidering. You know, what a 'proper' AFAB does.
> Revealing a cleavage that barely covered anything
Your cleavage is exposed breast tissue. You mean, 'her cleavage was bare, her shirt barely covering anything'.
> Pulled a thick wad of bills from inside his coat
Huh, here I thought they used coins. Maybe that's exclusively a Zaunite thing.
> The room was small, miserable compared to the ostentatious home Salo once had
And he still managed to keep his clothes and hair immaculate. What is his routine?
> Tell me, how was your wedding? Was the honeymoon boring?
He crushed his hubbywife's fingers with a piano lid, if you're wondering.
Look at this man, keeping his style, his hair and her perfume all perfect despite living in a shitty storage closet. Patrick Bateman is totes jealous!
> If I'm alive, it's because I've got brains
You sucked dick to get free while leaving the black woman behind to get beheaded. Priorities. The Aryan always dies last.
> Because with that leg of your dear Viktor, I highly doubt he can give you what you really want. I bet he can't even spread his legs properly without it hurting
Nonsense. He can bend like a pretzel just fine when it comes to getting dicked down; Big Dick Privilege means magical semen that can cure any ailment. Get on his level.
> Don't mention my wife
Funny, Jayce did, in fact, call Viktor his 'wife' at one point; or at the least, he's treated him like one.
> You killed the king and had the nerve to feign innocence
Hey remember when Viktor and his siblings were accused of regicide and never once went through a kangaroo trial for such an accusation? Remember when they were just told to go to their rooms and the whole thing blew over? The Frowning Friends had everything going for them and they STILL fucked it up. That's how retarded they are.
> I always knew you must have some...impressive qualities. Huge
Have you seen the fanart? The masculine male top always has to have a huge dick. That's how you know they're manly!
You will notice that Salo has the typical villain dialogue where he calls everyone else filthy rats and the scum of the earth while detailing his evil plans and motives for his arc. One also admires how this all comes back to having children, something Viktor lost with the aethernox, because trans men are only valued for their reproductive potential and nothing else. I am not surprised that Salo, like Silco, looks at Jayce like a filthy racemixer.
> Hiding like a rat
This is the only insult this author is capable of coughing up. Lame.
> If Zaun had remained under our control, this wouldn't have happened
It would have, though, because Salo was already losing money before the treaty happened. Hoskel and others noticed how his clothes were looking more hand-me-down, and he admitted several chapters earlier that he was losing income rapidly. He own maid that he had murdered in Chapter 10 said as much. He joined the entire Frowning Friends plot in the name of money, even if it meant going to war for lost income.
> It belongs to the people who were born and raised there
Whoa, Jayce, that sounds a little too nationalistic. We support DACA dreamers and birthright citizenship over here.
> Long knife
Knives, much like spoons and guns, have different variants for a different purpose. Here it sounds like he's using a stiletto or kitchen knife, something meant for stabbing and penetration. The knife in actuality is one that can slice through flesh, and at an odd angle: he cuts him diagonally from shoulder to hip, indicating a downward motion when Jayce was down. It should go from hip to shoulder, but that's my autism speaking. He's cutting him from the wrong direction and the author can't even remember how much blood he loses just a few paragraphs later.
> Your loved Viktor
*Your beloved Viktor
> You bleed like a pig in a slaughterhouse
So much for wearing that thick coat for protecting. The knife should have snagged on the material first.
> A rusty hammer lying forgotten in a corner
> The hammer struck Salo's head with a horrific crack
You'd think he would've hit him in the side of the head because Salo was facing forward, right? Nope, he gets blood at the BACK of his head.
You were hit in the HEAD, not neck. Salo was looking AT Jayce, not away from him.
> I'd become a monster
We know. You're having more difficulty killing Salo than you did beheading Ambessa's corpse. Blacks are just different.
So glad Jayce decided to pick a proper direction to bash Salo's head in.
> He was convinced the cut wasn't that deep
> Said it was several centimeters deep a few paragraphs ago
> Salo said he bled like a stuck pig
Pick one. First he sliced through your clothes to go shoulder-to-hip, now it's not that bad? Logic.
> When they were halfway across, he threw it under a bridge
All that work to create hollow point bullets and he throws away the gun. I'm sadder over than than his killing of Salo.
Oh? I thought it was a shallow cut that's no big deal? Why are we acting like it tore through the muscle?
> You will build the weapon to kill the one you love most
Sounds ominous, but I doubt that will happen. The last obstacle is dead. Now, unless the final chapter is 16k words, there probably won't be any other conflict. It's HEA from here on out.
> I'm your husband, and I'm telling you I don't want you here right now. Go back to bed!
You have to love how this universe is sooooooooooooo tolerant of gay and trans marriages, yet Jayce knows exactly what position he occupies because he is ordering his 'husband' around like he is his lesser, not equal. And why, might you ask, does Jayce have greater power? Penis privilege, baby. He knows what Viktor doesn't have, and what he does, and will weaponize it always.
> You're lucky. It's not deep...whoever did this to you isn't a very good shot
It's several centimeters deep and was done with a serrated blade, from an odd angle, and cut through heavy cloak and clothing to get to his back. Bitch can't even remember the details of her knife fight scene. Also, you'd say 'good cut'. He didn't shoot Jayce.
> Viktor was right when he said Jayce had abandoned him with his insecurities
Identifying as a man doesn't absolve you from doing all the emotional labour. Sucks when that happens.
> I agreed to bring him the heads of the traitors who harmed you and your family
> I myself pushed Ambessa to take her own life
She did that on her own. He just took her head afterwards - in one piece, amazingly. It was a revolver, so her head would have, to burrow a ye olde term, 'went asplode'.
Viktor killed a man when he was young, lmao. He should have known violence is how Silco and Vander became king. You really have to admire how Viktor's intelligence became watered down over time, and now he is no more than a secluded housewife. All those arcs for absolutely nothing.
> Salo was beyond inhuman
I like how we focus on Salo's gruesome death but Ambessa, who shot herself with a revolver and then had her head sawn off by Jayce, doesn't get a passing mention. No niggers in my yaoi!
> Kills cop once
> Only brings it up in a flashback twice
> Grew up with a drug lord 'father'
> Never experienced violence aside from killing a cop
OK.
This fic has, allegedly, gotten popular on Tiktok and several people have sent the author DMs thanking her for sharing. We will have to wait until next Sunday to say goodbye to this fic, and see how many plot threads have been properly resolved - or abandoned. I'm still betting that Viktor will miraculously get pregnant, securing Jayce's line. All that drama and passion and all we got was a traditional, conservative, Victorian family. Kinda disappointing when you think about it.
A fic with an admittedly wonderful piece of fanart decided to make one fatal mistake: going down the Frankendong route. The video I felt represents this video is a classic:
> His hammer was similar to the husk that kept the mage company
Yeah. It's corrupted Arcane magic, the same magic that's slowly killing him. Don't worry, it hasn't necrotized that rotdog.
> It was proof that Viktor was still alive out there
> Viktor was still alive out there
I think he's still alive out there.
Yeah, actually. You're supposed to be prepping for a major battle, yet a past version of the man you loved opened a portal like Portal and now you get a free hole - an actual asshole this time, as this author leans heavily towards trans Viktor.
> he couldn't bring himself to shave it; like he didn't deserve to, like it was a symbol of what he had done in that other place
Semicolons are your friends.
> For a split second it was as if reality fractured, and Viktor's face flickered between different versions of him
Mage Viktor doesn't want him tapping that ass because it might not stop a genocide...that he caused...and continues to cause...you know what, let's just get to the Frankendong.
> Feel like I can't breathe
That's how I feel after I'm done laughing at that flesh tube with a rod in it. The one time Viktor has a penis, you can't keep Jayce's? Bruh.
> Who are you preparing to fight?
I don't think 'You, because you're a genocidal maniac' sounds romantic, but you do you, bud.
> Did I do this to you
Yes.
> It wasn't your fault
Yes it was. He kept you there for half a year to mentally break you so you could kill that version of him, as well as infecting you with a biohazardous/magical bomb to make sure you did it. What a swell guy.
> I truly do not know if I am from somewhere else
...you opened a wormhole? That you said was theoretically possible? Even if you are a past version of Viktor, you ARE somewhere else by virtue of breaking the laws of physics.
The ONE time he has a penis and the other guy gets a Frankendong. I'm crying.
Nothing sexier than telling your partner you have to press a button in your silicone-stuffed labia masquerading as testicles to get your Frankendick hard. In every other instance, this man is hung like a horse, but now he has to blow it up like a Goodyear tire. How pathetic.
> You don't have this where I'm from
Here I thought his Jayce had a real penis but nope, it's a flesh tube too.
> The way he tongued the scar running along the underside of Jayce's cock
Nothing sexier than tonguing scar tissue that came from your wrist, back, or thigh. You could have a true and honest dick vein but you get this instead.
> His hands found Viktor's waist, encircling it
It's just uwu so smol.
> A surge of pleasure went through his body
> Viktor's body gave way and the head of Jayce's cock was suddenly wrapped in tight heat
The funny thing about this is that he cannot, physically, feel a single thing. Phalloplasties have no nerves aside from the base; it really is a cold flesh tube. They can't even tell if they've penetrated their partners or not. I'm honestly surprised the whole damn thing didn't fall off in the pit where he was eating wild lizards.
> You feel fantastic
You can't feel a damn thing, you idiot.
> He came with a strangled noise of his own
And nothing came out. They can't ejaculate, either. The only 'pleasure' comes from whatever remains of their clitoris. Sounds fun, eh?
This next author wants you to know that writing rape is her safe space and if you don't like it, don't read it! Lines for this fic include:
- With a pretty face and a tight pussy like that, everyone would want a piece of you, and I don’t know how long anyone could keep you as their personal whore. They’d try to pass you around so much. Tear you to pieces in weeks, days maybe.
- See? I’m already making you love my cock. Even though I want to punish you, I’m giving you exactly what you want.
- Then why are you already drooling like a fucking slut just because I’m inside you?
- I think I’m going to live in your pussy. Even though you moan like a whore, it’s still tight.
- “made for me,” “perfect”, “ready to breed”, “a waste, so much time lost when I could be making you my bitch, fuck every little hole of yours in that hell”
> Their presence calms me down more than they can imagine
Why are you stressed in a fandom space? Do you need to take your meds? You don't know them.
> This is my safe space
Your safe space is making a Mexican man a violent rapist? I never would have thought.
> Mold decorating the corners of the walls
You should get rid of that. Your lab won't be sanitary if there's mold on the walls. You're huffing that shit day in and day out.
> With wavy brown hair past his chin, a full beard, strong arms, tattoos covering him from his neck to his hands
You KNOW he's a rapist Big Boy Daddy because he's got the long hair and tattoos! All we're missing are the descriptions of him being a Greek statue and how his hands are so big they wrap around Viktor's waist - twice.
> The brownish skin, yet pale from lack of sun, was an indication that he had spent a lot of time locked up
Brown people's skin whitens from lack of sunlight? Whoa.
> Jayce should be furious with him for being one of the men who arrested him
I find it curious that the first punishment Jayce thinks of is rape. Did he rape the other men that imprisoned him, or is it just for our lil pooner here?
> The worst part was that Viktor had wanted to, felt compelled to break the law to help Jayce...but he was a coward
You can identify as a man, but that doesn't mean you identify with self-sacrifice. It's always about safety with these people.
> Why can you save your own life with my research, while I had to pay for it?
There's a joke here about a trans man using the work of a 'cis' man to 'complete' themselves, but I'll let you complete it on your own.
> The man seemed much more mature, aged like Viktor
What does this mean, lol. Are you trying to say he's aged thanks to prison? Just say that, Ms. Rape is My Safe Space.
> Prison must have done many unpleasant things to him - things Viktor wouldn't want to survive to see
I bet one of them wasn't anal rape, because while we can have our Muscly Baby Bear here be a rapist, having a dick forcibly shoved into his anus is off the table. We can tolerate the rape of a trans man, but not that. That's crossing a line.
> He didn't want to have imprisoned Jayce that day
First it was cowardice, now it's a need to use his research to better yourself. Either way, those holes are getting violated.
> I'll make sure your punishment teaches you a good lesson without breaking you that much
You have to appreciate how the 'punishment' the Mexican mutt thinks of is rape. It's just rape, rape rape with these men and the progshit authors writing them don't realize how on the nose that is.
> Pointed it at Viktor's womb - the place that still housed the organ, the only surgery he hadn't completed because he had neither the time nor the opportunity
Hmm, I wonder what the word is for a male inflicting torture on an AFAB's reproductive organs like that. God, it's escaping me right now. Moosoggygeez? Mysoggyknees? Help me out here.
> Pulled the sheath off his shirt, tearing everything in its path...revealing the metallic sheen of the pieces holding it in place
You have a see-through rib cage and organs and all that was protecting it was a flimsy shirt? Bruh.
> Viktor was still something that certainly wouldn't arouse any attraction to anyone who saw him
We're really using the 'I'm too ugly to rape' thing, aren't we?
> Effortlessly thanks to Viktor's docility
Trans men and docility, name a better duo. All they can do is just lie there and get raped.
Yes, he's grabbing lube so he can spork both holes with that 18 inch cock of his. Wait for the usual 'It won't fit' 'I'll make it fit' exchange.
> Pleasure was something far more dangerous
Indeed. Penis-in-vagina sex just hits different. It's almost as if it carries the risk of something traditional male-male sex doesn't have...anyone know what that is?
> Perhaps even a controlling one
He was previously described as 'docile'. You are not a controlling person if you are rendered docile with a finger up your pussy.
> Or did he want to die precisely because he was warming up, softening, getting ready for something
Getting turned on at the possibility of being raped to death by a hot Mexican? Man, I wonder what other 'safe spaces' this author has.
> Maintained the hunter's pose, the slow steps, the heavy presence
He's just a big meanie hunter, an animal, who can't control himself and needs a hole to fuck. Luckily there's an uwu deer right here to help!
> I thought a lot about violence, even though I was so well taught by my mother
A male feminist resorts to violence and rape? You don't say.
> I was never a brute
> Proceeds to engage in rape
Ho hum. It's OK though because he wants to see him cry while massaging his G-spot.
> You're very beautiful
He says, to the sunken-in skeleton with scars and who was just described as 'ugly' and 'unwanted'. These authors always do this before they write the most graphic rape you can imagine.
> With a pretty face and a tight pussy like that, everyone would want a piece of you
Of course, no one used Jayce as an in-house hole, because we don't tolerate the anal assault of our designated male faves. That is for cuntboys only.
> He knew how to take care of himself, didn't need anyone else's help. But he had never been to Stilwater
TBF, Zaun is just Stilwater on acid. You've got Urgot running around down there. It ain't a playground.
> If he had to violate someone to prove himself
Mm yes, because male feminists who are not brutes have to convince themselves to rape others. How quaint.
> Evil. That's what he saw in the other
Whoa, the formerly naive Mexican had a stint in prison and came out a violent rapist? He's got bad blood? Contaminated blood, and he's going to rape our uwu white FTM? WHOAAAAAAAA BUDDDDDDDY
> In a week or less, you'll be begging
He starts begging within a few paragraphs.
> The bulge was obvious in his underwear, marking a rigid and large member in the cheap fabric
Guess there was no Terry Crews there in the showers telling him to pick up the soap.
> A considerably large size, thick, decorated with unruly hairs and cuts near his groin
Oh, so someone DID try to take that Mexican man meat as a phallic charm, eh?
> Making it very clear that Viktor would not be able to take it
Spoiler: he takes it. Naturally, the male rapist has a large cock, while the uwu trans man just has a cock hungry vagina. He even later calls him his 'wife', meaning the author doesn't even see this character as male, but a 'cuntboy'.
> Viktor's body was docile under his touch
The author later says he doesn't want to be 'anyone's bitch'. One appreciates the irony.
> Forcing his leg to open more than it should
You can abuse and rape disabled people all you like provided you are hot. Them's the rules.
> A stone, a statue - a corpse
Joke's on you: men will fuck those things, and you're the 'beautiful' corpse he's about to rape. Have fun!
> Enter a little into both of his holes
That's right, he's getting both of them stretched out for that FIFA cock.
> Cruelty knows no logic
Still loving the fact that the token Mexican is made into a rapist. Well done.
> Swapped the finger inside his cunt for his cock
> He felt the tip of his cock kissing his cervix
No cervical bullying for once. But at least he was able to take those MS13 inches.
> He felt completely violated. The burning sensation of the tearing wasn't as intense as the feeling of being so, so filled
Rape is OK provided your rapist has a huge penis.
> See? I'm already making you love my cock. Even though I want to punish you, I'm giving you exactly what you want
This is a real line.
> Then why are you already drooling like a fucking slut because I'm inside you?
So is this. Are we summoning OhNovi's, 'his pussy drooled like a dog' again?
> Even his finger was too big
Yaoi hands strike again.
> Once he started fucking him, was brutal, Jayce fucked him like a thing
Yeah it's really something how, whenever this character is made into a trans man, they are objectified and turned into a collection of holes to be raped. Man, I wish there was a word for that.
> Every inch of flesh impaling him was brutal, giving a new meaning to the words weak, pain, pleasure, rape
> Viktor didn't understand what the punishment was supposed to be when he was being filled so well
The punishment is in the rape, retard. You are being raped and objectified because Jayce instinctively knows what sex you are, especially when he threatens to impregnate you. But that's okay, because at least your pussy gushed, right?
> His posture pushed in half by the mass of muscles above him, his pussy empty and his ass being forced open
Thank God for body mods and illicit drugs. They really can turn you into Superman.
> He had never been fucked in the ass before
Most of these authors haven't. Penis-in-vagina sex only, please.
> Too bad the third spinal surgery didn't work out. I'm sure you could have run with it
It's OK to mock a disabled person while anally raping them provided you are hot. Pretty privilege is a helluva thing.
> His ass hurt so bad it was almost good. His kidney burns and his insides throbbed with small shocks
Never worry about kidney stones or hernias every attack when this massive cock can lodge them free in just a few easy thrusts.
> I would certainly have taken you as my wife
Yep, they don't see trans men as men, despite insisting this is gay sex. They just see them as women-lite.
> It's possible to fill you...right here
Yes, he's going to pump his uterus full of that Mexican man semen so he can get his little brood of future rapists running around. It's Destiny, bro.
> Viktor didn't like the idea of being anyone's bitch
> Is currently made to be a rapist's bitch
Ho hum.
> Even though he was being squeezed and manhandled to serve as Jayce's vessel
That is called being made someone's bitch, fam.
> He was fragile and weak for letting this happen
> Be a trans man
> Get raped
Yeah, that fits.
> Made for me, perfect, ready to breed, a waste, so much time lost when I could be making you my bitch, fuck every little hole of yours in that hell
This is a real line.
> A husband, a secret, a partner
*Wife. He is the husband because he has the penis. You are the waifu because you have the AFAB parts. Thank you for coming to my kindergarten class.
> Jayce still fucking his limp, crying body, a prisoner of his own consequences
Well at least we know he actually WOULD fuck a corpse.
> Seemed the man was making love to a husband, and not raping a weak body for punishment
*Wife. He called you wife, remember?
> Jayce's cock was so big inside, bulging his stomach, making it seem impossible to fit him
At this rate you'll need a kidney transplant because that big ole dick of his will displace the old ones.
So, what did we learn? Anal and vaginal rape is fine provided you are hot AND a male feminist. Rape is the author's safe space so you better listen and don't judge! Don't like don't read!
The Ohioan who wrote, 'his cunt yawned' updated her ABO fic. This took three weeks for her to edit, and is filled with sex positions she cannot possibly fulfill with her fellow AFAB lover. Our noxious fart lover dreams of a big alpha male to breed that yawning cunt. Lines for this chapter include:
- Clearing off your desk to eat my pussy sounds like a very naughty, salacious thing to do
- Every inch that his alpha had to give was sheathed in the velvet sleeve of his cunt
- You see what you've made me, hm? So full with your pups, your strong, growing pups?
- “Feel ‘em, too. Our pups…you’re so full
- Makes the alpha in me so proud…and makes me wanna bend you over the closest surface and breed you.
- Gonna feed you fertility meds. Twins are just the start, omega, I promise you that.
- “You would have me – full with litters
- Too full to do anything else but grow fat and whelp.
- Want that so bad, baby, wanna give you litter after litter.
- Want you in a - ah - whelping box in our classroom. Just full with my pups, all the time.
- You are so filthy, so desperate for me…always craving more from me. More pups, more milk, more pussy
- Will you even have the self-control to wait to fuck me until after I have birthed these pups? Or will you give in to your desire and take me as I work to push them out?
I ain't gonna lie, chief: reading this chapter reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally makes me thinks this married lesbian has a pregnancy fetish. This repeated talk about being kept in boxes and shitting out 'litters' of offspring like you're a dog is...weird, to say the least.
> Viktor was happy for Jayce to take a seat between his thighs for an early dinner
I'm sure the author knows a few things about a dinner or two. Maybe she should cut back some.
> Clearing off your desk to eat my pussy sounds like a very naughty, salacious thing to do
This is a real line.
> Just make sure there are no student papers in the splash zone
Imagine writing your fetal development paper and you end up failing because your professor's pussy juice ruined it. I'd be livid.
> M gonna have to start lifting weights to carry you, mama
Funny. The author's lesbian wife can't lift her either. They would need a good ole Southern boy who's used to picking up hogs to handle them.
> Exposing the swell of Viktor's breasts
This can't even be considered a cuntboy. This is just a whole-ass woman.
> "Taste(s) better every day," Jayce rumbled, and twined one arm up to rest a hand on Viktor's belly as he ate
Is he eating out a cunt, or is he helping himself to Panda Express?
> A few seconds after, a series of kicks landed against their palms, rapid and out of sync
While he's engaging in an all-you-can-eat-buffet, his kids are engaging in Mortal Kombat in the womb. I wonder what their scores are. Is Johnny Cage winning?
> Was driving him spare
??
> It hadn't even been twenty minutes
Hey, sometimes this man is ready to go a second round after ejaculating. Alpha male physiology just works differently.
> The alpha pheromones were pouring off Jayce's body in waves
*"Father" from Sabaton starts playing*
> Obscenely slick heat of Viktor's cunt
> Drawing Viktor's sweet nectar in by the mouthful, pausing only to draw enough breath to fuel a possessive growl
He's like a hummingbird who discovered Taco Bell for the first time.
> Felt as if they were one flesh, connected in a rictus of mutual pleasure
Heterosexual do be like that.
> The growl rumbled in his cunt
You have to forgive him: alpha males become growly once they huff omega pheromones. It's like they're Buck and they're Ready to Fuck.
> The dome of his belly warped and shifted with the twins' frantic movements
Great, now they're on to Tekken.
> Spit-glossy pussy
> That's just what I was hoping to hear, baby. You know I like you hungry for me
The author when she finds out Taco Bell is open at night:
> Your job is to be pretty and grow pretty babies
Wow that sounds awfully bioessentialist. You sure you aren't a TERF? I don't think your lesbian wife would like that.
> Sneaking a grope of Viktor's plump ass
I really am thinking this is more of a self-insert, because there is no 'plump ass' to be found here. I'm reading a heifer getting fucked.
> His belly was squashed between them, and the pressure earned them a flurry of kicks
Now they are on Killer Instinct.
> He could smell Jayce the instant his zipper was open
Alpha male cock sure smells different. You can smell the masculinity in the smegma.
> I want to ride you until my hips give out, and then let you do what you will with me
Might have something to do with you being over 240 lbs.
> Between the brace on his thigh
> He wondered if he'd struggle through like this for the rest of the pregnancy
The experimental technology only lasts 9 weeks vs 9 months. He should have though of the physiological consequence before being used as a breeding cow.
> Whether he'd finally submit to a gown as Jayce so fantasized
really leaning into the 'barefoot and pregnant in a printed dress' that incels are mocked for loving. Luckily, obese Ohio lesbians share the same fantasies. Who knew?
> It took heroic effort not to dive face-first back into Viktor's pussy
It probably takes heroic effort to lift that big-ass belly.
> Dipped his fingers into the wetness of his pussy
...why am I reminded of someone eating hummus?
> I can see that, princess
We aren't even trying with male-centric terms, lol
> He leaned down and licked a long string up Viktor's core, coating his tongue in thick, sticky slick
Am I reading a smut scene, or is the author just talking about food? Hard to tell.
> Like a man starved
Cliché.
> Viktor was so thoroughly soaked that even after two licks, his chin was shiny
So slick I bet he could clean out the McDonald's ice cream machine with a single spray. Who needs a plumber when you've got this breeder sow omega on the job?
> So he could be eaten with a sort of dedication usually reserved for competiton
I was right: his pussy IS an all-you-can-eat buffet, and it's being eaten like a prime rib. I suspected that the smut scenes read more like the author eating food, and I was correct. Her voracious appetite is leaking through in her fic; instead of getting prime rib with her, you're getting the fatty cut of a pig.
> The twins shifted inside his belly, one kicking and the other elbowing in response
They are now on Soul Caliber.
> He continued to eat, licking and sucking voraciously
The author when she finally gets a taste of a McRib:
> Until he'd lapped up all there was to eat
I really can't tell whether we're talking about sex or eating dinner. This is by far the weirdest smut I've read.
> Or I'm gonna pin you down and take you like this
Careful, you might pop that Oreo cookie with your Pillsbury Dough Dick.
> The twins wriggled and kicked against the pressure
They are now on SSBB.
> Dragging his soaked cunt from tip to root and back again, coating it in his abundant slick and feeling Jayce throb beneath him
> The stretch was exquisite - the ache of it, the sheer pleasure of being so utterly filled
We know he's big, thanks. It's like he's getting the Subway sandwich treatment.
> Every inch that his alpha had to give was sheathed in the velvet sleeve of Viktor
That velvet sleeve would be like an industrial aluminum roll by now.
> The ecstasy of his cock being so lovingly enveloped inside his mate sent shocks of pleasure up Jayce's spine
This is a lesbian, with a lesbian wife who talks about how evil TERFs are, obsessing over the shape of a cock inside a vagina that is exclusively used for reproductive purposes. Sounds like she's got some repressed instinct to be kept in a box and pop out a litter.
> If it wasn't for his fully belly, he'd be able to see the outline of his cock in Viktor's belly
I'm surprised you can't see his kids fighting against it like it's a VR monster.
> Because his forte was science, not English
Haha, the dumb Mexican can't speak English because his dick is getting enveloped by a velvet vagina. See what traditional Christian sex does?
> Knowing that it was the simple nudity of his own body, heavy with Jayce's pups, which had him stupefied was a deep satisfaction
The more I read, and the more you will notice, is that this author also has a fat/inflation/feeder fetish - on top of the obvious pregnancy one. Observe the following lines:
> Feel 'em too. Our pups...you're so full, V
> Makes the alpha in me so proud...and makes me wanna bend you over the closest surface and breed you
Yeah there's some repressed instinct and fetish in there. This is a lesbian woman married to another lesbian woman, collectively 400 lbs together, and one wishes an alpha male would knock her up and turned her into a lusty, pregnant woman with 'fulsome curves' filled with the products of the 'fruits of his loins'. You can come out as bisexual any time you like, miss. I know it's shitty to grab men in Ohio but there's always Detroit.
> I will get you more pregnant next time
Yep, there's a fat/inflation/pregnancy fetish right there. He wants Viktor 'more pregnant', as in, fatter and larger with his pups, because fuck Viktor's disability and their own tech making gestation occur in 9 weeks - he needs that AFAB pregnant, pregnant, pregnant!
> Gonna feed you fertility meds. Twins are just the start, omega, I promise you that
> Fantasizes about his breeding sow even fatter, as if their worth is in shitting out kids and nothing else
Wow, your woke lesbian wife should have a few words about that. You sound like a bioessentialist TERF.
> Some milk he sprayed into Jayce's mouth
Not the breast milk enjoyers! How does it feel to be in the same ballpark as right-wing men obsessed with breast milk, fatty?
> It'll be full to bursting by the time they're due. You would make me bigger?
> Need you heavier. Need you bigger. Know you can handle twins, now - so, triplets, next time
The farmer when he discusses his breeding sow on the farm:
> You would have me - full with litters
> Want that so bad, Vik, baby, wanna give you litter after litter
They are literally fucking dogs. Common Filth would have had a few choice words about this, replete with snorting noises. Who knew someone who went by 'anoxiousfart' wants to get bred like a prized animal?
> Want you in a whelping box in our classroom. Just full with my pups, all the time
I'd call PETA and then film your reaction once you find out they're getting euthanized. We can't have wild animals on the school grounds.
> He imagined himself with a litter of pups, whelping in the corner of their classroom with Jayce at his side
OK I changed my mind. I'm swapping your pups with the Fauci beagles. Hope they like Tunisian sand flies!
> If that is me full with one little, and another at my breast, you will have it.
"Let me be a breeding sow because that's what AFABs are meant to do. No, I don't sound like a conservative with a pregnancy fetish trying to continue my bloodline, I'm a progressive lesbian married to another woman!"
> They're so big, V. You've never bee this big before. It does things to me
Someone's a feeder.
> Perhaps being in a whelping box will prolong my pregnancy. Being sedate and waited on
Just let progressives speak for themselves and you will get the most sexist shit out of their mouths. If I told this fat carpet muncher she should get in a box to whelp some pups, I don't think she'd like it.
> We can fill it with blankets from our nest. Bring Elise into class. Show everyone how a good omega cares for those pups
It's totally not sexist or degrading to bring in a heavily pregnant WOMAN, force her to lay down in a box and then deliver a baby in said box in front of people who are getting aroused by the act. It's FEMINIST and PROGRESSIVE because it's a cuntboy, see? It's not a real woman!
> Oh fuck, baby. I dunno
Spectacular writing.
> Tell you how much I crave your cock, how I can think of nothing else after I feel your pups moving within me
1. This is a real line. 2. This lesbian thinks an awful lot about cock and getting bred more than other lesbians. Do you wish your wife who talks about meanie TERFs had a dick and fulfill your long-awaited pregnancy fetish?
> Viktor's scent had already permeated every inch of the lab, so it didn't surprise Jayce in the slightest that the omega used some of his time alone to get off
Alpha pheromones so strong it only affects their mate and not anybody else, who would, logically, also be driven into an animalistic, sexual frenzy. We can handle AFABs giving birth in a box but not rape!
> Being so full of you, in every way I can. I cannot focus on my reseach
He's just a silly cum slut who wants to get dicked down and pregnant, uwu. It's just his natural role to get pregnant!
> You should come fuck me instead. I spend my days soaked through, weak in the knees like a fawn, feeling your great babies fill me more and more everyday
I think you have a craving for authentic male penis, dear author. You're free to cheat - ethnically, at least. I hear polyamory is big in your circles.
> So big, so full for me, my omega
Me when my washing machine takes a huge load
> Will you even have the self-control to wait to fuck me until after I have birthed these pups? Or will you give in to your desire and take me as I work to push them out?
Yes, stick your dick in AS YOU ARE PUSHING A BABY OUT. Hammer that infant back in that uterus in a reverse abortion! That doesn't sound fucking weird at all!
> Fuck you through it
I will literally call animal control or bribe a surgeon to saw your dick off.
> Always craving more from me. More pups, more milk, more pussy
Bitch sounds like she's Ron Jeremy. I guess it fits because they do look alike.
> His animalistic grunts, usually reserved for his own ruts
Name a single time where he hasn't acted like an animal. Go on.
> Give me another pup
You haven't ovulated yet.
> His stomach hard against the fecund curve of Viktor's belly
I'm sure the author wishes she had those 'fecund curves' as she stuffs her face full of Dunkin' Donuts.
> His soaked cunt grew somehow wetter, making the sounds of their fucking even louder and more salacious
Guess you don't need childbirth at all when you can just keep shoving the kids inside, eh?
> Viktor imagined Jayce fucking him like this in the whelping box
> Students watching on in awe and undisguised arousal as the alpha laid claim to his omega in the basest manner he could
And yet none of those other 'alphas' are tempted to jump in there and rape; they're just kept in checked because big mean Mexican alpha here would fight them. In all seriousness, one appreciates how a lesbian fantasizes so much about pregnancy that she imagines a cuntboy shitting them out like puppies, in a box, as if we were watching dachshunds give birth and not humans. The 'basest manner' is also heterosexual as fuck; what do you mean that the basest manner for sex is reproductive sex? Are you some kind of Mormon?
> Chuffed
That is what tigers do.
> I'll figure it out one day, just you wait. You'll rue the day you asked me to give you another pup
He's gonna make him so big he's gonna be bursting like that chick from 'Slither'.
> I'm gonna build you that box, too. You can teach your lessons from it. Like a good omega
You can't have maternity leave because that's feminist and analyzing gender roles, but you can stay in a box and give birth to a litter of puppies humans while you teach, because proper omegas lay around, get fucked, and give birth. We're exploring gender, but wokely.
> My tiny violin. For your erection
OK, I laughed.
> I will deliver your pups in a box you'll build me
Then they'll be taken to PETA so they can be 'disposed of' in the name of humanitarian causes. We have to deal with overpopulation, folks.
> Having our pups in a whelping box, in front of the whole class
It's dainty and feminine to have your kids in a box like you're a prized dog. Hospital beds? Pshaw. We do things the natural, Christian alpha male way.
> If they don't come during class, I can always record it and play it back (in) a highlight reel
I hope you realize that's weird as hell to film your birth and then play it so your students can masturbate. I never thought a lesbian with a pregnancy fetish would write shit like that, oh no. Shocked me to my core, truly. Child porn clearly doesn't bother our Ohioan with noxious farts.
You have a pregnancy fetish, that much is true. Who knew a sow loved seeing her blorbos get as big as her after she helped herself to the Pride refreshments? Hope those Crumbl cock cookies were worth it.
> I think this makes us equal
Filming your AFAB vagina owner giving birth - after talking about fucking them while they push said infants out - so you can show it to your class as pornographic material is totally equal. Makes you look like an equal human being and not a disgusting piece of shit with Marquis de Sade's beliefs about equality. Repressed lesbians and barely concealed pregnancy/CP/inflation fetishes, name a better duo/trio.
I don't know why this one wasn't properly tagged, but the author is a big fan of the Captive Prince series. If you think she gives Laurent a pussy, you'd be dead wrong. Take a guess who she makes the married AFAB instead. Also features a couple jerking each other off in front of their five-year-old. Lines for this fic include:
- I want my come in you. Want you convulsing around me because I made you come faster than ever before
- Fuck, you feel incredible. Your pussy wants it bad, huh?
- He takes in the stunning visual of his raw and well enjoyed pussy. His tiny cock stands out, begging to be sucked, framed by folds crying out for him to come back, to be the home for his cock once more
> The memory of Viktor's startled reaction to Jayce pressing his hot clit to the chilly ceramic has been replaying over and over
Put this in the 'scenes you physically feel' folder.
> Their son has abandoned the room, leaving cleanup and it to them alone
Meanwhile, the AFAB, the vagina owner, is the one cleaning up, while the penis owner lounges on the couch. Never fails.
> Jayce is still amazed how Viktor's body grew a human being, housed them and formed them within his own
Wow, it's almost as if penis-in-vagina sex is reproductive sex, and you engaged in the sex that has led to the propagation of our species. Isn't the AFAB body wonderful?
> The hunger that's bled through his shell and become quite obvious stirring within them
This doesn't make sense. What is stirring, and what in what?
> Blood has filled him out but they both know Viktor can ease him into rock solid form
...that is what an erection is. The penis becomes filled with blood. It's like we're learning sixth grade sex ed.
> He realizes Viktor doesn't have any intention to stop
Your son does not consent to your sexual acts.
> His maternal voice
Oh? Our vagina owner doesn't have a paternal one? He's the uterus owner, the birth giver, the mama? Imagine that.
> The rich brown of his skin tags him as Jayce's
He'd be a lighter shade because of that Slavic heritage. Jayce himself is a mutt, so you're now 1/4 Mexican. Half-and-half, like coffee creamer.
> See what his ears do, until they find out whose genetics officially win
...your kids ears remain the same. The skin tone will likely get slightly darker as males are darker than females, but it is clear those Mexican genes won out. Of course, what he noticeably didn't inherit was his 'maternal' father's disability. He's a spunky kid, able-bodied and perfect. Eugenics sure is wonderful.
> His body is being devoured by instinctual need
What's more important: keeping your sex acts away from your kid, or having a quickie loud enough for them to hear? You'll never guess which one wins.
> Crouched down outside the car
Wow, he did that without his mobility aids? Fascinating.
> Not a condom to be seen
Just heterosexual sex, no phones, steam in the window in the woods, just two guys (and a half) living the moment.
> Motherly tone
> His husband
Pick one.
> How obvious what they're doing to anyone but a five-year-old
Spoiler: they end up ruining the couch and the elephant. Thank God for a five-year-old's innocence.
> I want my come in you. Want you convulsing around me because I made you come faster than ever before
Speedrunning that shit like Dale Earnhardt Sr's crash.
> The sizeable man he's still stroking
We know he's well-endowed, thanks.
> The clothes are just an obstacle, as if Viktor's a sweet desert that needs to be unwrapped
Commas (and semicolons!) are your friend.
> He's comically large for his piece of furniture but his ankles rest on the arm and he has to use his arms to keep his weight off
Accurate depiction of Jayce:
> A reminder that they really shouldn't be doing this, in broad daylight of all times
Colons are your friends.
> Jayce's size is still a job to accommodate
> Precise and gentle, a single thrust that fills Viktor to the brim
> The wet warmth that's swallowed Jayce is incredible
Sounds like it wasn't a job after all.
> Fuck, you feel incredible. Your pussy wants it bad, huh?
This is a real line.
> Railing as hard as he dares with their kid wide awake and waiting just upstairs
> They're loud enough for their 'plaps' to be heard
> Viktor gushes 'wave after wave' of pussy juice, staining the couch and carpet
> Their son doesn't hear a thing
That elephant must be more valuable than Babar if he can't hear what his parents are doing.
> Jayce is thick, stretching out Viktor's body, carving out space for himself
Almost like he's carving him in the shape of his cock, eh?
> The result is Jayce pushing him into the edge of the cushion with every hammering thrust
I guess if you're into your clit see-sawing against cheap fabric for a quick orgasm, it works, but that just sounds itchy.
> Helpless to the sweet fucked out sounds he makes
So much for being quiet.
> After that he's just coming, like it's nothing but a piece of lint
You're gonna have lint caked in your vulva at that rate.
> ...or falling asleep next to him, like he doesn't have a say in what his body does when it's Jayce making decisions, making him feel good, (as he) drips around the cock driving into him and onto their family counch
I don't think Resolve is going to fix that. BTW, that elephant is hidden under the cushions. It's getting splashed with pussy juice like it's suffering an acid attack.
> The hot slick smearing all around his cock, all too much
They don't even clean up afterwards. They just go into the kitchen and eat.
> His cock's sunk in deep, releasing right up on Viktor's cervix. He imagines this occasion being how a second child will be conceived
Depends. Are you ovulating? The zygote also has to implant; if it doesn't, no baby. Enjoy the come spitting out of you like a microwaved Twinkie, though.
> Frankly, Viktor doesn't care
Yeah you totally don't care if you expose your child to adult activities. That totally doesn't warrant CPS taking your precious baby away.
> Viktor becomes away of Jayce still breaching him, the sticky come keeping them together. He feels cored open
I now know what Austrian strudels go through.
> Jayce watches every inch pull out, coated with a creamy clear mix of their come
I now know what s'mores go through.
> They have the ability to get up and act somewhat normal
Not that poor elephant. You gotta wash that thing.
> Jayce doesn't really attempt to tame his pride
No shit. That elephant probably smells like the 'pride' that is now staining their couch. At least offer to wash it first!
> He takes in the stunning visual of his raw and well-enjoyed pussy
I just think of a mushy tomato, sorry.
> His tiny cock stands out, begging to be sucked, framed by folds crying out for Jayce to come back, to be the home for his cock once more
His 'tiny cock' begs to be sucked, while the actual male penis makes itself home in that 'well-enjoyed pussy'. Almond vs cucumber type shit.
> Now they're partaking in a dangerous game
I'll say. Just look at how bad this gets:
> Their baby could grow impatient, a quality he got from either of his parents
> The fantasize about fucking in front of other students/minors in the pickup lane
> They also dream about fucking in front of their own son's bedroom
What is with this fantasy about having sex in front of a child and nonconsenting people? It's weird, bro. That's not normal.
> A fire's determination to consume lights Jayce's dark eyes
*His eyes were lit with fiery determination
> Needs it hard and consistent, any change in pace can place him back at the starting line
Autism but make it sexual.
> Jayce wants to know if fucking Viktor into inanimate objects will get him coming faster
Have you tried a MAC truck? The feared Indian trains? Those would give you a rush!
> The thought of a mindless Viktor, pussy fucked red, soaked, loose and needy for anything, spit-slick lips pleading
Yes, they were on their metaphorical knees, holding their metaphorical hands together, begging for penetration from a 'cis' male. We only tolerate reproductive sex that gets you blown open and fucked red around here.
> Punching in and out of him from behind while he clings to the front door
Thought that was literal for a second. At least it wasn't their own child's bedroom. No, really: what the fuck was that? Why would you write that and think that was sexy? No wonder this is a locked fic. Shit's weird as hell.
After writing that gender affirming girlcock fic where our dear princess was looksmogged by an Italian waiter, prettybadmagic has gone back to her roots:unblooded girlchild something involving men for once. Lines for this chapter include:
- He wants to blame the booze. He wants to blame his dick. But his dick is attached to him, and he drank because his brain said yes.
- He knows his dick steered him to his darkest depths
TL;DR: author known for owning the 4chan chuds once again makes the titular Mexican a rapist who tried to assault a lesbian this time.
Wow, would you look at that: the token Mexican who can 'pass as white', sexually assaulted a lesbian while drunk, got a restraining order, and now contemplates suicide because his life is now 'cancelled'. His residency was never revoked because he didn't get a criminal record for some reason, and then he outright admits he had 'always known' he was a bit of a rapist. He's just so touchy-feely and uncaring of personal boundaries; he's like a dog, see?
> He knows his dick steered him to his darkest depths
There's the Colleen Hoover writing I've come to expect. I just didn't think she'd start with attempted lesbian rape. That's a BIG no-no to Caitvi fans; you, as a cis male, can't correctively rape a lesbian! That's only acceptable if you are a trans woman.
> It's a condition he's lived with since birth
The Mexican is a natural-born rapist? You don't say.
> Be a Mexican attempted rapist
> Choose surgery because it's a field where you have to have a degree of disassociation to operate
> Fulfills the stereotype of most surgeons being sociopaths
> Is on SSRIs and other drugs to maintain his rapey tendencies
Wow, the jokes don't even have to write themselves. They are just part of the canon now.
> I'm a rapist, mom. Not all the way, but in spirit
Sounds like she needs to get out the tire and gasoline and take you out like they do in LATAM.
> He's a criminal and a coward
Don't forget a rapist!
> He needs a wife and a handful of kids
Yes, he needs an easy vagina to make him forget the fact he tried to rape a lesbian. Those tendencies won't pass to his male children at all, no ma'am.
> There's no such thing as bad men, only bad socialization
So we really are leaning into the 'Jayce is a dog' thing, because that's how these people act around pit bulls. It's also an ignorant thing to say when men commit 98% of violent crime, lmao.
> Some sort of help program for dudes who got cancelled
Your 'cancellation' includes a restraining order, which will be in court records, and would become available if someone requested it. I highly doubt the hospital board would enjoy reading about how their diversity hire tried to rape a lesbian.
> A cute round nose
He has a Slavic nose. It's rather large.
> He was headed to some sort of human trafficking scheme where losers outed themselves and got thrown into captivity
You tried to rape a lesbian. I think a few anal adventures would help you empathize with what Caitlyn felt.
> The staff members and attendees are all dressed the same, with white linen pants and shirts
Oh, so your regular mental hospital, sans the dog collars. It's giving 'Shutter Island' mixed with 'A Cure for Wellness', except you just get fucked like a dog. Bark.
> His soul will heal if he's able to take pressure off himself
Owning the 4chan chuds by sending a rapist to a wellness retreat is...an interesting turn of events.
The rapist Mexican on SSRIs is also on ADHD meds? You don't say. No wonder he has to be treated like a dog. All men are dogs and they obey a reward-based system. Give the man food or some dick and he's good to go.
Yeah, can you imagine giving a man like that orders like a dog? That's like, totally dehumanizing, man. Not while asylummaxxing like that.
> He makes Jayce's dick say hey, what's up
You are going to be reading a lot of that as the chapters go on. They will be posted above the spoiler as is custom for some 'hey, what the fuck' laughs.
> He has moles that speckle his pale skin - great skin
Looksmogged by the cult leader, what an L.
> Like yes, Jayce fucked up. But that doesn't mean he has poisoned his soul forever
An ADHD Mexican who got drunk and nearly raped a lesbian isn't like putting a sad sticker on your homework. Notice how he doesn't feel any guilt towards it whatsoever; he was handled a restraining order and even admitted to being a rapist. It's a shame he won't be spayed and neutered like one.
> It smells like the inside of his nostrils and throat
...OK.
This is the first chapter. The rest will no doubt be longer, so get ready for that shitshow when it comes. We're heading right into the shitticane and we don't have protection.
I posted this in the yaoi thread, but 'All the Young Dudes', the most popular Harry Potter fanfic on AO3, is getting turned into an original series called 'Wolfboy'. This means the original fic will be deleted. MsKingBean, who had a tagline on how she is 'disgusted' by JKR's 'transphobic' views, will now get a seven-figure deal from a work based on her IP. Look at Queen TERF here, making people millionaires.
ATYD started the 'Marauders' subfandom, and is responsible for keeping the MLM side afloat, much to the consternation of those who want to abandon JKR's work forever.
I wasn't aware Remus had opera ballads in the full moonlight.
Interesting:
Well, we can't be angering LeGuin, now can we? We only have Queen TERF to worry about.
