🍽️ حلال Connor Bible - Everyone's Favorite Molly Ringwald loving, adoption hating, aspiring writer and bellybutton fucker

[BOLDYSPICY!]

Did he just leave again?

@Lady Houligan , that was amazing. <3

 

[Lady Houligan]

Did he just leave again?

@Lady Houligan , that was amazing. <3

He's probably furiously trying to figure out a comeback to my pointing out that experience separate characters' emotions simultaneously would be confusing as hell. And thank you! I'm half tempted to keep running with it. I've already figured out where to go with Eva's abilities that she'll gain.

 

[Connor Bible]

I actually want to finish RE and publish it one day, and in fact, I was working on the first chapter of the second draft during my absence.

 

[JU 199]

I actually want to finish RE and publish it one day.

Oh look. you're back.

I was working on the first chapter of the second draft during my absence.

Sure you were.... (not)

 

[Connor Bible]

No really. I think it has potential to be a great psychological thriller with enough diligence and serious rewriting.

 

[*Asterisk*]

Get a job, hippie.

 

[JU 199]

No really. I think it has potential to be a great psychological thriller with enough diligence and serious rewriting.

Connor, that's not gonna happen. It's super derivative and you don't have a good grasp of genre.

I'm sorry man. People on this forum has told you countless times to do something else. It's becoming repetitive at this point.

 

[chimpburgers]

No really. I think it has potential to be a great psychological thriller with enough diligence and serious rewriting.

Great potential that will stay stuck in your mind if you don't do jack shit. You bore me.

 

[cumrobbery]

No really. I think it has potential to be a great psychological thriller with enough diligence and serious rewriting.

But the question is, are you going to actually do said rewriting?

 

[Connor Bible]

Well, I want to finish it. It's my choice.

But the question is, are you going to actually do said rewriting?

Actually, thanks to @Lady Houligan , yes.

 

[Silver]

Make sure you actually finish it before you try rewriting it!

 

[chimpburgers]

Actually, thanks to @Lady Houligan , yes.

Translation: Copy and paste what she wrote, barely change anything and pass it off as your own.

And you're not gonna pay her? Damn, you're cheap.

 

[Connor Bible]

Make sure you actually finish it before you try rewriting it!

I wouldn't even consider the first draft of RE a draft. It was just junk. I could consider what I'm working on to be the first legitimate draft.

 

[JU 199]

Well, I want to finish it. It's my choice.

@Connor Bible Let me preview what gonna happen-

1) You're gonna try writing it
2) You're gonna get frustrated because your novel's built on a foundation of sand.
3) You'll then return to the farms and sperg about how much you suck.
4) Tardrage when farms calls you out.
5) Then you'll get salty and say we're the people fucking you over.

Always the same shit.

 

[Connor Bible]

I'm actually feeling a lot more confident about my writing, today.

 

[chimpburgers]

I'm actually feeling a lot more confident about my writing, today.

That's what you said like 5000 other times.

 

[Connor Bible]

Damn, you guys are cynical.

 

[CatParty]

I'm actually feeling a lot more confident about my writing, today.

Do you write poetry?

 

[chimpburgers]

Damn, you guys are cynical.

No shit sherlock.

 

[Connor Bible]

Do you write poetry?

I never could get into poetry. I prefer prose.