It’s poorly written, self-indulgent, preachy drivel. It’s genuinely not even good enough to read just to laugh at. Our author promises a witty satire, which amounts to “guys, greedy companies and da orange man bad!!!”. Brave and controversial, I know.
The entire thing is just dialogue; no introspection, no set dressing. It’s written like fanfiction.
”Blah blah blah blah blah blah.” Said Faggot 1. “Blah bloo bloo blah.” said Faggot 2, eating xir pizza. “Blah blah” replied Faggot 1. “Blah Bla-“
Ad infinitum, ad nauseum. It’s like being at work, stuck between two coworkers involving you in inane conversation about their kid’s sportsball game and what they’re having for dinner. It’s agonisingly boring.
When it’s not that, it’s the author‘s self insert character (who passes perfectly btw) soapboxing about tranny rights and gender in giant walls of text.
There is no attempt to distinguish characters, they all speak with the exact same speech patterns, nothing makes them unique, and it’s all dialogue, so have fun trying to tell anyone apart.
I have a particular bone to pick with the fact the tranny author lived in the UK for two years, and therefore feels qualified to make one of his characters English. Shockingly, he fails miserably, with constant cringey inaccuracies.
It’s incredibly poorly written, the plot is awful, it’s painfully boring and tumblr-humour quirky. I’d rather shit in my hands and clap than read another word.
Here is an excerpt from near the end, the true dramatic peak of the “””””””book””””””. Riveting, biting satire here guys. Trannies in the comments of each chapter are glazing it hard, proving their cult’s subzero IQ and window-licking tendencies.
To be fair, the dude looks like he shoves crayons up his nose for the craic, no shock it reads like utter horseshit.
0/10