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You need an editor. Bad. This reads like something an elementary schooler would write.

You and Connor Bible should get together sometime. He's about as " good" of a writer as you are.

Please get an editor, you have the word to and too confused.

And for the next 60 minutes, it was really hot.

Needs more gay buttsecks.

The autism is rife in this what with all the exact numbers. Also you use the number 3 a lot. Is there any significance to that number for you?

Wow, Len, this book of yours is really raunchy. Are you sure you want people to see this side of yourself?

Your fixation with numbers is very autistic

Werner has a light smell of self-insert. Marrying someone 11 years younger seems like the sort of thing you wish would happen to you. Also I think...

Have your ever thought about illustrating a comic and possibly crossing over two characters, like Thomas The Tank engine and Jay Jay Jetplane? You...

I sincerely apologize to @Connor Bible for ever making fun of his writing.

We've found a love story that actually is worse than Twilight. </oldmemeisold> Yes. Because it's the fucking Internet. And unless you're a...

So, our children's story involves a young jimmy and a young willy (both slang terms for penis) and a john (a slang term for an older homosexual...