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Some of this writing is straight out of the "Repercussions of Evil" Doom Fanfic. Only far less entertaining. Someone once put it nicely...

It's annoying. It's really annoying. Writing like this. Small sentences. Always pausing. Breaking any sense of flow - that which long texts...

Even reading that excerpt was like nails on chalkboard. What's with the misuse of dashes and fragmented sentences? Why is the word choice so...