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Bones? What the devil is McCoy doing in a galaxy far, far away?

This is the worst writing I've seen outside of pornographic fanfiction. And even some of that has this beat. Though I think some of this is just...

This reads like a first draft that no one bothered to touch up, once it was typed out. Jesus Christ. And the choice of words is so utterly out of...

Now, I'm a nobody and English isn't my native language, but even to me this writing feels off. I'm sure I could've written it better...